These were really fun! Good job to both of you
(Also is that a Shizana cameo I see, Taylor <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 )
Tsumi vs. Sugar Rush
Critiques & Comments
# 9
Posted:
Jan 6 2018, 06:10 AM
# 8
Posted:
Jan 6 2018, 12:21 AM
Taylor: I really enjoyed your comic man, it was the better of your latest ones. The narrative and flow worked our pretty damn well and really highlighted the good that I am sure void has below its chaotic, murderous surface.
Rursus:
I really really love your art man. However, I felt the story and flow was a bit off. Its was a bit to chatotic and it suffered in readability for me. That said. I love your style and I hope to see much more of Sugar Rush again.
Rursus:
I really really love your art man. However, I felt the story and flow was a bit off. Its was a bit to chatotic and it suffered in readability for me. That said. I love your style and I hope to see much more of Sugar Rush again.
# 7
Posted:
Jan 4 2018, 02:00 PM
Taylor: while this one is not nearly as depressing as the others before, i'm really beginning to feel a need to buy sweets to everyone around me.... NO I'M NOT EMOTIONNAL I'M NOT *tears up*
Rursus: Just as fast paced and dynamique as your other comic. Tho The goofball side of your character could use an additionnal panel of relative calm to better settle his character
Rursus: Just as fast paced and dynamique as your other comic. Tho The goofball side of your character could use an additionnal panel of relative calm to better settle his character
# 6
Posted:
Jan 1 2018, 10:46 AM
Short and sweet comics are so delicious!
Okatutaylor- I have enjoyed watching the evolution of your art and character over the years and it is only getting better! The scene content was inspiring; a change for sure!
Rursus- Interesting character concept, truly, but I had a difficult time reading your dialogue. Keep it simple and maybe zoom out to see if it is legible before finalizing.
More comics go go go!
Okatutaylor- I have enjoyed watching the evolution of your art and character over the years and it is only getting better! The scene content was inspiring; a change for sure!
Rursus- Interesting character concept, truly, but I had a difficult time reading your dialogue. Keep it simple and maybe zoom out to see if it is legible before finalizing.
More comics go go go!
# 5
Posted:
Jan 1 2018, 08:59 AM
Taylor I really enjoyed the weight of this comic Tsumi feels to be slowing down and the sentiments are cute and a lot of fun and just is nice to see.
Rursus the art looks spectacular but the build up for action doesnt really have any build up or pay off so a lot of the movement feels hard to follow, and Im not sure exactly what is happening through the entire comic but this is an amazing comic to see.
Rursus the art looks spectacular but the build up for action doesnt really have any build up or pay off so a lot of the movement feels hard to follow, and Im not sure exactly what is happening through the entire comic but this is an amazing comic to see.
# 4
Posted:
Dec 24 2017, 05:56 PM
Aaaawwww YEEAAAAAAAAA
# 3
Posted:
Dec 24 2017, 05:02 PM
Excited!!
# 2
Posted:
Dec 24 2017, 03:02 PM
hype!!
# 1
Posted:
Dec 24 2017, 02:23 PM
OHHHH~
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
1 week
Ended:
Jan 7th, 2018
Votes Cast:
11
Page Views:
1611
Winner:
otakutaylor
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Rursus - You nailed just how Tsumi'd act, giving that super polite citizens arrest. ^_^ Both on this side and your Jessie valley comic I ADORE your floating panel pages. while there's a few confusing spots, they are a great use of space and timing. Plus, that breaking hole in the wall panel and the effects encircling? You've got some serious skill for composition. It was an honor to finish off Tsumi's survival challenge against Sugar rush, and I look forward to seeing more of your stuff!