i know, i went way the wrong direction with darren's development as a character.
my new guy'll be better.

Darren, you gotta be more original man.  I read the first 4 or 5 panels and already recognized things you took straight from naruto, kenshin, and outlaw star.  c\'mon man.

crud, i spoke to soon about diasatsu part. i dunno if the pages loaded for me the first time around. but anyway, good stuff epic/mags. page 2 had me rollin, heh heh.

i\'ll be blunt, you two both have promise, experiment more with the panels, don\'t leave so much negative space unless theres some clear reason to it. and the sasuke fireball technique was way to obvious for me to digest.

and Mags...mags mags mags, whats goin on man? i\'ve been waiting for your triumphant return since tourney one, when are you gonna light it up??

orbot, your progress is starting to show with each thing i see from you, and i\'ve watched since you sneaked onto the scene (RPS?). the black areas on page 2 really jumbles the whole page, whats going on? aside from that, i must say that as long as you keep rockin your pencils to reach that higher purpose, i\'ll keep watching. occasionally give feedback if i\'m not too lazy