Angelina vs. Cherrie Fox

Angelina vs. Cherrie Fox

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Wei Ingnan
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# 25   Posted: Mar 29 2005, 08:14 PM
you both need to put more of an effort into your fights

Mistress Shade
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# 24   Posted: Mar 29 2005, 09:37 AM
The sizing problem on Cherrie\'s second page wasn\'t a problem for me.  I could still read it fine when was zoomed out.  If I couldn\'t read it either way, then it would have been a problem.

Art-wise, both submissions are pretty similar.  Both are still sketchy but Angelina\'s is a bit cleaner.  And uh, pink ink... no.

Writing-wise, Angelina\'s story hade a little more meat to it.  I might suggest that Cherrie consider a title page optional rather than to use it to meet the minimum requirements of the challenge.  More comic, less title.  In other words, do one if you have time.

RevengeMachine
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# 23   Posted: Mar 28 2005, 05:02 PM
I\'ve found it to be a rare thing when both submissions in a battle can make me laugh out loud while reading them, which both of you have done here.  Slexy line art, and excellent entertainment value.  Keep up the good work.

happyface
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# 22   Posted: Mar 28 2005, 01:56 PM
Angelidollinda, their heights are wrong on the second page. Cherrie fox 7\'4\" while angelina is 4\' 8\" but you have them sitting together at nearly the same height.

NyarLaThotep
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# 21   Posted: Mar 28 2005, 12:43 PM
Both art styles are very similar and that style looks quite polished in both cases. AWD edges out Angelido by a little though.

Of the stories both were short and simple but I\'m giving AWD the edge here as that story had some action in it and gave a better sense of Angelina\'s character. Angelido\'s story was perhaps too short. Seemed like more of a punchline with no joke to build it up.

Kii
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# 20   Posted: Mar 27 2005, 03:24 PM
omg I love both of your styles!!! <3<3  >_< I have to battle both of you sometime in the future xD!!

I have no problems, other than, Cherrie dear? The second page was kinda big.

Great job the both of you ^^

(Pi)
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# 19   Posted: Mar 27 2005, 02:13 PM
short and sweet is right. AWD definitely had a better quality fight, with three actual pages instead of two and a cover. <_< Still, I thought angel\'s fight was funnier, I\'m not sure why. Probably was the Swanky Roe cameo.

BTW: AWD, you did Rockman Neo on Newgrounds?! OMG, that was freakin\' great! Just wanted to say so, since I don\'t have an account on NG.

cinfuldragon
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# 18   Posted: Mar 26 2005, 09:46 PM
Cute!

Both were short & sweet, and it works well.

MechaWasabi
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# 17   Posted: Mar 26 2005, 09:38 PM
Woot! Swanky cameo!

Cute stuff.

DelBarrio
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# 16   Posted: Mar 26 2005, 02:33 PM
Very cute, both of you. ^^

MaxximumMATT
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# 15   Posted: Mar 26 2005, 01:08 PM
Wha? AWD came back! I smell a challenge...
Three pages.. not much space for story i suppose.. and that\'s what i\'m seeing.. very little story and almost no actual battling.
However, it\'s kinda refreshing not to see \"traditional\" battles all the time. And i guess for two chars who don\'t really know each other the limited story actually works quite well in both cases. This brings it down to art... and i may just have to give AWD the upper hand there.. only by a little... but still.
I love both you guys though.. so good luck to both of you as the votes keep coming in...

angelidollinda
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# 14   Posted: Mar 26 2005, 03:33 AM
FINISHED! *dies* x_x

angelidollinda
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# 13   Posted: Mar 18 2005, 10:32 PM
Ignore my entry... i\'m going to redo it during my extention

angelidollinda
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# 12   Posted: Mar 18 2005, 10:28 PM
oops, crap ^^;;

Wei Ingnan
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# 11   Posted: Mar 18 2005, 09:03 PM
Cherrie Fox has an extension

Wei Ingnan
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# 10   Posted: Mar 18 2005, 08:55 PM
Cherrie Fox has an extension

jonas
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# 9   Posted: Mar 18 2005, 08:21 PM
seforin: I\'ve been searching for those mp3s :D
PLEASE contact me at 3leaves at mail.nu if you see this.
thanks

seforin
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# 8   Posted: Mar 17 2005, 11:53 PM
wow for what im about to say im probably gonna lose any chance of joining my character and such. But AWD Ive been a personal fan of your artwork since i was first shown glimces of the rockman neo project you did a while back. Your art style in mechs is something i hope to achieve mechnical wise.

I still have all your mp3s of your rockman neo sound track you did. Even if i get in shit for writing this i just want you to know your artwork (one of many) is a personal reason why i got from 3d modeling to drawing recently....for both self improvement reasons, and reasons i wanna increase my 3d by learning it by hand first.....hope you win this match dude!



PTPS
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# 7   Posted: Mar 16 2005, 10:23 AM
OMG! Awd I didn\'t know you were back on Entervoid!! Good luck you two!!

Kii
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122 comments
# 6   Posted: Mar 14 2005, 06:15 PM
Ah. AWD,  I know who you are!  I\'ll be studying you. *smirks*  Good luck to you both!

luniara
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# 5   Posted: Mar 12 2005, 06:37 PM
Andrew Dickman. HEH. >=) I\'d like a peice of that to mop my floor with. HUR HUR. Let\'s see what you can do.

A Bad Idea
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# 4   Posted: Mar 12 2005, 02:22 AM
OHSHIT. First CB, now Andy D ! Damn man, I was hesitating to ask why you left VOID in the first place, but welcome back man !

THIS WILL BE HOT. >_O

Phill
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# 3   Posted: Mar 11 2005, 11:00 PM
Ah, now I remember (and took a look at his website) Andrew Dickman! I remember seeing your stuff on deviantart, very well animated art you\'ve got yourself, I know I won\'t be dissapointed now... or will I? TIME WILL TELL!!

Phill
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# 2   Posted: Mar 11 2005, 10:56 PM
AWD... I don\'t know about you, but that sounds really familiar right now... You two better not dissapoint!

angelidollinda
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# 1   Posted: Mar 11 2005, 10:39 PM
Alright, battlin' mah buddy! ^^

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Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Apr 1st, 2005
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