Heavyweight Tournament 2005: Semifinals / Traveler vs. Kappa
Critiques & Comments
# 25
Posted:
Apr 1 2005, 10:34 PM
:/ well yea, cuz i didn\'t get to see kappa in action so much as vertigo.
# 24
Posted:
Apr 1 2005, 10:26 PM
(Looks up at Jade) ... Does that really matter? I already voted long ago... but my comment got erased somehow
Rookie: Very good art man! Though the story seemed a bit bland to me, you need more rock\'em sock\'em next time. Other than that, I\'d love to see all of these pages colored.
Travler: While not as good artwise, you put alot of work into that story. It was a very good read, although... you ending could of been better without Johnny Warsaw in there, he just seemed tacked in for good measure, but the way he was taken down was quite anti climactic (He is Johnny Warsaw man, guy who shot his Bro James! He\'s not going to be taken down with just a flag pole man!). Anywho, very good comic, it won my vote.
You both pumped up from the last round, I\'d like to see a rematch in the future perhapes. Keep it up or something?
Rookie: Very good art man! Though the story seemed a bit bland to me, you need more rock\'em sock\'em next time. Other than that, I\'d love to see all of these pages colored.
Travler: While not as good artwise, you put alot of work into that story. It was a very good read, although... you ending could of been better without Johnny Warsaw in there, he just seemed tacked in for good measure, but the way he was taken down was quite anti climactic (He is Johnny Warsaw man, guy who shot his Bro James! He\'s not going to be taken down with just a flag pole man!). Anywho, very good comic, it won my vote.
You both pumped up from the last round, I\'d like to see a rematch in the future perhapes. Keep it up or something?
# 23
Posted:
Apr 1 2005, 09:27 PM
lol well in all fairness the battle is traveler vs. kappa, not traverler vs. vertigo. so in that respect i think rookie followed more closely.
# 22
Posted:
Apr 1 2005, 05:10 AM
Rookie: ur art is very capable and competent. But i know u can sqeeze mad shizzles than this! I felt like you underused Vertigo... but that\'s probably coz i read Mr. Robot\'s side first. A little bit of a let down especially after being exceptionally teased by your battle before this. I remember ur ideas were pimpin (damn, listenin to hip-hop while typing makes one talks gangsta) with the whole Parallel \"sideways\" timeline thing and the alternate Kappa. I know ur capable of hot shit better than this. Still a considerably good effort withstanding on its own. Maybe coz we\'re closing in on the tourny that makes me/us have high expectations.
Mr. Robot: TRAVELLER UNLEASHED!!! Awesome! I was really feelin the flow on this! Felt like i was in a european action movie! Excellent use of Vertigo! Let me repeat that again: Excellent! And u got to reveal more of Traveller\'s character with the effect of the 8minute rule. I was totally feelin his rage & rampage. Highly believable in his character. Trav is total bad-ass. Story and execution was virtually perfect dude. A lotta love was evidently put into this.
Well done to both of you. The finish line is inches away...
Mr. Robot: TRAVELLER UNLEASHED!!! Awesome! I was really feelin the flow on this! Felt like i was in a european action movie! Excellent use of Vertigo! Let me repeat that again: Excellent! And u got to reveal more of Traveller\'s character with the effect of the 8minute rule. I was totally feelin his rage & rampage. Highly believable in his character. Trav is total bad-ass. Story and execution was virtually perfect dude. A lotta love was evidently put into this.
Well done to both of you. The finish line is inches away...
# 21
Posted:
Mar 30 2005, 08:26 PM
mr robot ...your stories and paneling make up for your art in a really big way!!! Seriously ...I really enjoyed your stuff here.
There\'s just something about shortcuts and unnecessary text explaining things that diminishes work in a big way. I knew it was a penatrating glare and I knew they were time phasing (or whatever it\'s called). You didn\'t need to say it, because your images already do that. \"insert cityscape here\" is distracting.
You have a nice style, though, Rookie ...actually, a handful of styles Your images, especially the close-ups, are right good!
There\'s just something about shortcuts and unnecessary text explaining things that diminishes work in a big way. I knew it was a penatrating glare and I knew they were time phasing (or whatever it\'s called). You didn\'t need to say it, because your images already do that. \"insert cityscape here\" is distracting.
You have a nice style, though, Rookie ...actually, a handful of styles Your images, especially the close-ups, are right good!
# 20
Posted:
Mar 30 2005, 10:46 AM
Traveler, all I can say, is EPIC.
Kappa - so THAT\'S how it\'s gonna be, eh? Sweet ass man, seriously.
Kappa - so THAT\'S how it\'s gonna be, eh? Sweet ass man, seriously.
# 19
Posted:
Mar 30 2005, 04:08 AM
btw. Trav\'s crazy, \"oh-no-you-didn\'t\" look on page 7 is boss.
# 18
Posted:
Mar 30 2005, 04:06 AM
ack. What happened to Vertigo\'s locks? T_T and why\'s he so evil? T_T
Ahh well, in anycase, awesome battle mr. robot. I got burninated. :x
And uhh yeah... I\'ll make Vertigo a void fighter eventually. It\'s just that, right now, having a character as all powerful as he is play the main character in a story wouldn\'t make for as good a read, i think anyways...
Ahh well, in anycase, awesome battle mr. robot. I got burninated. :x
And uhh yeah... I\'ll make Vertigo a void fighter eventually. It\'s just that, right now, having a character as all powerful as he is play the main character in a story wouldn\'t make for as good a read, i think anyways...
# 17
Posted:
Mar 30 2005, 01:48 AM
maybe it\'s just me, but in Trav\'s pages Vertigo looks remarkably like Toast. who does infact have similar powers....
# 16
Posted:
Mar 29 2005, 05:06 PM
Vertigo is Rookie\'s character that has not been submitted yet, and may not ever be... he\'s a new Father Time and is awesome. May I ask who you is, Mr. Prophet?
# 15
Posted:
Mar 29 2005, 12:50 PM
Damn mr.robot, ur pulling it off again, the underdog might go all the way.
I give this to you cuz it entertained me alot. Seems like you put alot of effort into it.
I give this to you cuz it entertained me alot. Seems like you put alot of effort into it.
# 14
Posted:
Mar 29 2005, 08:21 AM
trav is not punished by anyone in particular; that\'s the way his ability works- defying the 8 minute thing makes him be all tore up and crazy. thought that was clear enough, sorry.
# 13
Posted:
Mar 28 2005, 11:57 PM
This time-traveling shit makes my head go screwy...
Rookie: Not up to what you\'re capable of. How long does it take you to color your pages? I;m positive you\'d turn a lot more head if you finished all of your pages to the same standard. Great fight, but I want more.
Mr. Robot: Damn, that fight was intense. Had me going the whole time. The ending was a little confusing, though. Why is Vertigo punishing Traveler? And why does he have him fight the alternate Kappa? Time for a Beyond Battle? Good stuff, my vote is yours.
Rookie: Not up to what you\'re capable of. How long does it take you to color your pages? I;m positive you\'d turn a lot more head if you finished all of your pages to the same standard. Great fight, but I want more.
Mr. Robot: Damn, that fight was intense. Had me going the whole time. The ending was a little confusing, though. Why is Vertigo punishing Traveler? And why does he have him fight the alternate Kappa? Time for a Beyond Battle? Good stuff, my vote is yours.
# 12
Posted:
Mar 28 2005, 08:47 PM
so.. there\'s two kappa in void now?
# 11
Posted:
Mar 27 2005, 11:02 PM
uploaded.
..i think...
hahahahaha. awww well. *walks off, shuffling feet*
..i think...
hahahahaha. awww well. *walks off, shuffling feet*
# 10
Posted:
Mar 27 2005, 10:59 PM
Oooh, I\'m definitely looking forward to this battle. Best of luck to both of you. Go Rook!
# 9
Posted:
Mar 18 2005, 11:51 PM
mine\'s submitted... friday 19th. 9 pages, and forgive me for the declining quality in the last 2 or three. wish i could be in town to work on it the whole time. OH WELL THINGS HAPPEN. I look forward to seeing how all this turns out. I\'M OFF TO NEW ORLEANS BYE.
# 8
Posted:
Mar 17 2005, 08:02 PM
Good luck both of ya Do your best bok! No more RO!
# 7
Posted:
Mar 17 2005, 05:57 PM
Rook you better kick arse on this man *prod prod*
# 6
Posted:
Mar 17 2005, 03:06 PM
Goooo Robot!
# 5
Posted:
Mar 17 2005, 01:59 PM
you can do eet.
# 4
Posted:
Mar 16 2005, 05:28 PM
yeah, uh. thanks for your vote of confidence, lune. just so\'s everybody knows: i am going to be out of el town for a week, and therefore will have all of SEVEN DAYS to do this fight. Is this an excuse for the coming crappiness of my comic? i hope not, because all of my calculations indicate that it will be epic.
i\'m still screwed, though. luck, rookie.
i\'m still screwed, though. luck, rookie.
# 3
Posted:
Mar 12 2005, 06:39 PM
and then there was 4 left, who will Kappa be up against. Charlie or Indigo!? CHARLIE OR INDIGO!? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Or..........Or will it be...................The traveler. hurry this shizaz up.
Or..........Or will it be...................The traveler. hurry this shizaz up.
# 2
Posted:
Mar 11 2005, 05:02 PM
yey
# 1
Posted:
Mar 11 2005, 06:55 AM
16 days? how nice.
i am fuckin screwed.
i am fuckin screwed.
Tournament Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Apr 4th, 2005
Votes Cast:
33
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1852
Winner:
mr. robot
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