Aw man thanks everyone. Comments like that make MY day!
Jingu - That was a very fair critique. You spotted a couple of my biggest comic faults. I do need to capture more motion in the drawings themselves. I should really study some more animation styles to get that feeling. Plus, my speedlines and motion lines are often half-assed so that really takes away from it. The fact that i never leave room for captions bugs me too. I see what mean about how it crowds the jokes a lot. Thanks for that great critique!
Kyosho - Thanks for IMing me way back when and encouraging me to come back here!
I hope I have it in me for another one guys - this was so much fun.
Ayumi vs. The Strike
Critiques & Comments
# 25
Posted:
Feb 21 2005, 10:15 AM
# 24
Posted:
Feb 19 2005, 02:01 PM
fucking great stuff!!
# 23
Posted:
Feb 18 2005, 09:38 PM
Wow, Strike, you SO didn\'t dissappoint. I\'m glad you changed it up a little like you did. It keeps the character fresh.
# 22
Posted:
Feb 18 2005, 03:12 PM
Best @#$%ing fight I\'ve EVER read. I\'m glad I brought you back. (hee hee) MORE Andre!!
# 21
Posted:
Feb 18 2005, 04:31 AM
and THAT boys and girls is how a comic is MEANT TO BE DRAWN.
Andre is a beautiful beautiful man...and you put charlie in there...god bless you.
I\'m gonna have to wail on marley something HARDCORE when i see her next. its tackle town for marzipan.
Andre is a beautiful beautiful man...and you put charlie in there...god bless you.
I\'m gonna have to wail on marley something HARDCORE when i see her next. its tackle town for marzipan.
# 20
Posted:
Feb 18 2005, 01:43 AM
Oh man Andre! That was awesome! I can\'t believe how much your style has evolved. It\'s fricken\' fantastic! I hope you had a good experience cuz I so wanna challenge the Strike! I\'ll have my fighter in real soon. Honest. JV
# 19
Posted:
Feb 17 2005, 10:34 PM
longer comments-
I really like how you play the environment, and the drawings are very good too, detailed but not confusing. yay. And I love how the strike have the balls and eyes, and still have brows to express whatever he has in mind
maybe the only crits I have in mind is the lack of \'motion\' feeling and some of panel choice kinda clutter the \'jokes\'..... man I don\'t make any sense here.
and your strike character makes me checking back your old entries.... WHY SO FEW? (love the movie references) do not ever default again.
I really like how you play the environment, and the drawings are very good too, detailed but not confusing. yay. And I love how the strike have the balls and eyes, and still have brows to express whatever he has in mind
maybe the only crits I have in mind is the lack of \'motion\' feeling and some of panel choice kinda clutter the \'jokes\'..... man I don\'t make any sense here.
and your strike character makes me checking back your old entries.... WHY SO FEW? (love the movie references) do not ever default again.
# 18
Posted:
Feb 17 2005, 10:34 PM
STRIKE WINS!! STRIKE WINS!!! I friggin\' laughed out loud a few times, you rock my socks. Great art and writing, joo weeeeeen!
# 17
Posted:
Feb 17 2005, 09:57 PM
I never knew I missed you, da staykuu..
I still miss ayumi though
I still miss ayumi though
# 16
Posted:
Feb 17 2005, 09:01 PM
This one made me a big fan of The Strike. Funny stuff.
# 15
Posted:
Feb 17 2005, 08:29 PM
man, andre, that was just what my day needed. You\'re a funny, funny man. Great fight.
# 14
Posted:
Feb 17 2005, 07:45 PM
Poor baby seal.
Awesome battle! It had a great flow of humor. It was very clever I love it!
Awesome battle! It had a great flow of humor. It was very clever I love it!
# 13
Posted:
Feb 17 2005, 04:51 PM
shortie defaulted
.. haha void high school that\'s grand.
.. haha void high school that\'s grand.
# 12
Posted:
Feb 15 2005, 12:43 PM
Uploaded! Woo hoo! Lets rock!
# 11
oh no it doesn\'t. I\'m just stupid from lack of sleep... again. Anywho, good luck to both of you, \'cause you\'ll both need it.
# 10
OH MY G. Come one B, you\'ll get hugs in like... 15 days?! This battle ends during Katsucon..!
# 9
OMG MARLEY OHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhh
Keeks, you almost make me wanna start participating again. ::jealous of the group hug::
Keeks, you almost make me wanna start participating again. ::jealous of the group hug::
# 8
I MISSED YOU BOTH SO MUCH ::weep:: COME ON, GROUP HUG
# 7
Doth my eyes deceive me? Ayumi?? Strike?? The hotness!! I must see this fight go down. Bring it, foo's!!
# 6
TIGHT AWESOME!
you both rock! hooray for the return of mr. strike!
you both rock! hooray for the return of mr. strike!
# 5
oh sweet!
# 4
Ahhhh Yeah! The Strike is back in action! Can't wait!!! JV
# 3
OH SHIT. This is going to be so hot, you guys don't even know.
# 2
OH SHIT AYUMI IS ON. ANDRE TOO.
Good luck.
Good luck.
# 1
Oooh, here's a nice little match up! Good luck you two!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Feb 24th, 2005
Votes Cast:
26
Page Views:
2169
Winner:
Andre
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I\'ll post the battle in the forums later.
btw Andre you\'re epic