Oh come now, if anything we\'re Team Icaria.
Its really sad Cog couldnt get it in on time, but at least my tazer skills made sure Icarus finished and submitted it on time... which is to say he finished it 1 minute before it was due.
Cog vs. Danielle
Critiques & Comments
# 20
Posted:
Dec 8 2005, 12:27 PM
# 19
Posted:
Dec 6 2005, 09:34 PM
WOOO team icarius!
# 18
Posted:
Dec 4 2005, 05:02 PM
The reapperance of Rok was quite a treat and a good extentsion on the ending of their last onfrontation...good job.
P.S: If yall are wondering (who the fuck is this guy?) im trying to get my character put together and get her on hopefully before X-mas. But i gots exams to study for so i dunno if that will work out....
P.S: If yall are wondering (who the fuck is this guy?) im trying to get my character put together and get her on hopefully before X-mas. But i gots exams to study for so i dunno if that will work out....
# 17
Posted:
Dec 2 2005, 12:22 AM
Aw...Default. I was kinda looking forward to how this would have turned out.
I think at the current moment I may be more partial to your black and white work then your color. The characters tend to come off as more flat and unvaried. However, it may be because of the lack of background and the overall \'incomplete\'-ness of the colors themselves as it has been stated before. I\'m not saying everything has to be fully rendered, just done with more care.
Now that I\'m done being mean, I will say that the actual entertainment factor was pretty good. To have a such a cute girl be threatened by a secret agent was already setting itself up for a goot short story. You also maintained a consistancy in your style despite possible time constraints. And on the third page, the panel where Cog is flung back with blood spurting, is an angle I really like. And to sound artsy, the blood has a neat shape about it. It\'s moments like that in your comic that I am reassured that you\'ll be fine in the next battle.
I think at the current moment I may be more partial to your black and white work then your color. The characters tend to come off as more flat and unvaried. However, it may be because of the lack of background and the overall \'incomplete\'-ness of the colors themselves as it has been stated before. I\'m not saying everything has to be fully rendered, just done with more care.
Now that I\'m done being mean, I will say that the actual entertainment factor was pretty good. To have a such a cute girl be threatened by a secret agent was already setting itself up for a goot short story. You also maintained a consistancy in your style despite possible time constraints. And on the third page, the panel where Cog is flung back with blood spurting, is an angle I really like. And to sound artsy, the blood has a neat shape about it. It\'s moments like that in your comic that I am reassured that you\'ll be fine in the next battle.
# 16
Posted:
Dec 1 2005, 03:19 PM
Not quite right Colossus, WolfByte lays a claim on \"viod\". I don\'t know what a viod is, but VOID has nothing to worry about.
# 15
Posted:
Dec 1 2005, 02:56 PM
Yay! Rok saves the day^^ That\'s some great pages Neo!
# 14
Posted:
Dec 1 2005, 02:37 PM
You will rule Void?`PFFF you will rule my ass! XD
# 13
Posted:
Dec 1 2005, 12:51 PM
I will rule viod
# 12
Posted:
Dec 1 2005, 07:21 AM
pretty tight battle neoicarus. pretty cool lookin style. good job.
# 11
Posted:
Dec 1 2005, 03:24 AM
companionship?
Nice fight, more background would\'ve been nice, but time constrains where it will, no?
Keep up the good work.
Nice fight, more background would\'ve been nice, but time constrains where it will, no?
Keep up the good work.
# 10
Posted:
Dec 1 2005, 01:49 AM
Could have probably used more complete coloring. And some backgrounds would\'ve been nice. Otherwise it seemed to be in pretty good nick. For three pages it was decently entertaining.
I\'m sorry we didn\'t get to see the Cog side of the fight though.
I\'m sorry we didn\'t get to see the Cog side of the fight though.
# 9
Posted:
Nov 30 2005, 09:47 PM
i love it! so cute!! rok certainly make a good companion for danielle!!!
# 8
Posted:
Nov 30 2005, 08:25 PM
Ah hahaha! That was so cute with Rok coming back like that. <3
# 7
Posted:
Nov 30 2005, 07:48 PM
Damn. Well, I\'ll be looking forward to the Beyond Battle, man.
# 6
Posted:
Nov 29 2005, 05:38 PM
Congratulations Dane! You win amigo. Sorry I don\'t really have anything to put up. I\'ll do it in a beyond when its done.
# 5
Posted:
Nov 29 2005, 01:33 PM
I asked for an extension, but I dunno if I\'ll be getting it. If not I\'ve got to default. Sorry Dane. I\'ll try to post it as a Beyond when I finish it.
But I can\'t wait to read yours! I\'ve heard good things about it.
But I can\'t wait to read yours! I\'ve heard good things about it.
# 4
Posted:
Nov 23 2005, 06:31 PM
Go Dane!...and Cog!
# 3
Posted:
Nov 23 2005, 06:30 PM
If toast is a tool than what are u...? I mean lets compare: If toast is a tool than you must be a nut or a bolt cuz if you think about it toast can screw you every which way. Your his bitch...
BITCH!
come come all voidlings let\'s all hail at the best of the bitches!
BITCH!
he he no wonder you had a cock in your mouth when you said you were the best.
BITCH!
come come all voidlings let\'s all hail at the best of the bitches!
BITCH!
he he no wonder you had a cock in your mouth when you said you were the best.
# 2
Posted:
Nov 12 2005, 11:45 PM
DAMN...Dane is out for blood. With two challenges you fellas better look out!
# 1
Posted:
Nov 8 2005, 07:10 PM
BATTLE OF THE WILLS! This is gonna rock !
Make it a good first battle Jacky Boy.
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Make it a good first battle Jacky Boy.
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Regular Match
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Dec 14th, 2005
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Good job none-the-less Dane, gotta love those....eyebrows.....
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