That\'s funny, because I was told he finished TWO minutes before the deadline...*smirk*
Good job none-the-less Dane, gotta love those....eyebrows.....

...eyebrows....

Oh come now, if anything we\'re Team Icaria.
Its really sad Cog couldnt get it in on time, but at least my tazer skills made sure Icarus finished and submitted it on time... which is to say he finished it 1 minute before it was due.

WOOO team icarius!

The reapperance of Rok was quite a treat and a good extentsion on the ending of their last onfrontation...good job.

P.S: If yall are wondering (who the fuck is this guy?) im trying to get my character put together and get her on hopefully before X-mas. But i gots exams to study for so i dunno if that will work out....

Aw...Default. I was kinda looking forward to how this would have turned out.

I think at the current moment I may be more partial to your black and white work then your color. The characters tend to come off as more flat and unvaried. However, it may be because of the lack of background and the overall \'incomplete\'-ness of the colors themselves as it has been stated  before. I\'m not saying everything has to be fully rendered, just done with more care.

Now that I\'m done being mean, I will say that the actual entertainment factor was pretty good. To have a such a cute girl be threatened by a secret agent was already setting itself up for a goot short story. You also maintained a consistancy in your style despite possible time constraints. And on the third page, the panel where Cog is flung back with blood spurting, is an angle I really like. And to sound artsy, the blood has a neat shape about it. It\'s moments like that in your comic that I am reassured that you\'ll be fine in the next battle.

Not quite right Colossus, WolfByte lays a claim on \"viod\".  I don\'t know what a viod is, but VOID has nothing to worry about.

Yay! Rok saves the day^^ That\'s some great pages Neo!

You will rule Void?`PFFF you will rule my ass! XD

I will rule viod

pretty tight battle neoicarus. pretty cool lookin style. good job.

companionship?

Nice fight, more background would\'ve been nice, but time constrains where it will, no?

Keep up the good work.

Could have probably used more complete coloring.  And some backgrounds would\'ve been nice.  Otherwise it seemed to be in pretty good nick. For three pages it was decently entertaining.

I\'m sorry we didn\'t get to see the Cog side of the fight though.

i love it! so cute!! rok certainly make a good companion  for danielle!!!

Ah hahaha! That was so cute with Rok coming back like that. <3

Damn. Well, I\'ll be looking forward to the Beyond Battle, man.

Congratulations Dane! You win amigo. Sorry I don\'t really have anything to put up. I\'ll do it in a beyond when its done.

I asked for an extension, but I dunno if I\'ll be getting it. If not I\'ve got to default. Sorry Dane. I\'ll try to post it as a Beyond when I finish it.

But I can\'t wait to read yours! I\'ve heard good things about it.

Go Dane!...and Cog!

If toast is a tool than what are u...? I mean lets compare: If toast is a tool than you must be a nut or a bolt cuz if you think about it toast can screw you every which way. Your his bitch...

BITCH!
come come all voidlings let\'s all hail at the best of the bitches!

BITCH!

he he no wonder you had a cock in your mouth when you said you were the best.

DAMN...Dane is out for blood. With two challenges you fellas better look out!

BATTLE OF THE WILLS! This is gonna rock !

Make it a good first battle Jacky Boy.

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