wow, good job on what you turned in man. i love that story and i was going to do the same thing with my story. lol
have Jamie all freaked out when she wipes out her memory and all. (hint hint...maybe a rematch biatch!) like i said because sorry about the crap lettering. trying to get better in one thing at a time. and now its the art of storytelling. but in due time ill be getting better at the lettering and all. and i still wish that i had time to color it. i might and just do it anyways if I\'m bored and no battles. but thanks all on comment for this fight. they do help a lot for me.
Mrs Robinson vs. Jamie Chase
Critiques & Comments
# 19
Posted:
Dec 18 2005, 08:18 PM
# 18
Posted:
Dec 17 2005, 11:18 PM
In the Jungle the mighty Jungle the Lion sleeps tonight.
# 17
Posted:
Dec 17 2005, 09:36 AM
wow, nice job to the both of you.this was a very good battle.
mrs. robinson- nice job on ur pages.i dig ur style.the colors really added alot to ur pages.they came out real nice.just too bad u didnt finish.i cant wait to see the finished product.very nice lookin.
MoD- great job on ur pages dude.the first thing i\'de like to point out is how many pages u always do.this time u did 5.the extra effort u have been puttin is really payin off man.ur stuff is improvin.plus your storytellin flows nicely.good job.just need to work on that lettering man.
good job to both but my vote has to go to the man of danger on this one.
mrs. robinson- nice job on ur pages.i dig ur style.the colors really added alot to ur pages.they came out real nice.just too bad u didnt finish.i cant wait to see the finished product.very nice lookin.
MoD- great job on ur pages dude.the first thing i\'de like to point out is how many pages u always do.this time u did 5.the extra effort u have been puttin is really payin off man.ur stuff is improvin.plus your storytellin flows nicely.good job.just need to work on that lettering man.
good job to both but my vote has to go to the man of danger on this one.
# 16
Posted:
Dec 16 2005, 01:59 AM
wow does this mean that Robinson and Black was held in the same asylum too ?
# 15
Posted:
Dec 16 2005, 01:37 AM
...and only ONE spelling mistake!
# 14
Posted:
Dec 16 2005, 01:36 AM
FanTa_DudE: I dig your colours and design, pity you didn\'t get to finish the rest..
manofdanger: Writing needs a bit of work. Some nice action going on though. You\'ve got my attention for your next fight / beyondbattle though.
manofdanger: Writing needs a bit of work. Some nice action going on though. You\'ve got my attention for your next fight / beyondbattle though.
# 13
Posted:
Dec 16 2005, 01:34 AM
Sorry MoD. Ran out of time. The next 3 pages were meant to be Jamie exploring Robinson\'s surrealistic, nightmarish, inner world. Very Freud. It was gonna be done in a super grunge messy un-inked style (similar to the Robinson intro story). I was also exploring the idea of memory as being completely unreliable. Imaginary even. Was gonna suggest Robinson\'s infamous tragic past may have all been self-fabricated. I\'ll post the finished product on the forums soon as i get it done (wont be for another 2days at least).
As for your side of the battle... with your last battle and this one, you have really upped the ante!! After reading ur last battle i knew i was gonna be in deep shit. MoD man, you have an almost complete grasp of the comics medium. Every shot & angle you have used is concise, functional and effective. I think i really envy that. Those are really elaborate backgrounds and exteriors! The story-telling is great. I especially love that conclusion/epilogue. Very cliff-hanger. Very comic-medium (TV shows like Lost & Alias got it from comics).
Good job MoD. This one should be in the bag.
As for your side of the battle... with your last battle and this one, you have really upped the ante!! After reading ur last battle i knew i was gonna be in deep shit. MoD man, you have an almost complete grasp of the comics medium. Every shot & angle you have used is concise, functional and effective. I think i really envy that. Those are really elaborate backgrounds and exteriors! The story-telling is great. I especially love that conclusion/epilogue. Very cliff-hanger. Very comic-medium (TV shows like Lost & Alias got it from comics).
Good job MoD. This one should be in the bag.
# 12
Posted:
Dec 14 2005, 07:37 PM
Geez im cutting it close...
# 11
Posted:
Dec 8 2005, 10:31 PM
pages uploaded
# 10
Posted:
Dec 8 2005, 04:52 PM
MoD has purchased an extension as well.....match pushed forward
# 9
Posted:
Dec 7 2005, 12:16 PM
catfight?.......sweet.
# 8
Posted:
Dec 6 2005, 10:27 AM
as long as you made some cakes
YUMMY
YUMMY
# 7
Posted:
Dec 6 2005, 10:14 AM
wow if there was a way not think right then i wish i could, thanks for the thing that will keep me up at night. and its all good, if i wasn\'t too lazy and all i would do another week and color these but blah.
# 6
Posted:
Dec 6 2005, 08:40 AM
Sorry MoD for resorting to an extension. I had gastro for a week. My asshole was like a non-stop firebreathing dragon.
# 5
Posted:
Dec 4 2005, 05:37 PM
Fanta has purchased an extension...one week....MoD is still expected to submit on time
# 4
Posted:
Nov 18 2005, 11:08 PM
i have boobs
# 3
Posted:
Nov 17 2005, 03:01 AM
Mrs Robinson is back ! my hitlist just got bigger
# 2
Posted:
Nov 16 2005, 10:59 PM
Good to back! Finally graduated from my degree. Now i got an almost endless amount of free time! Hopefully The Missus will be racking up the battles one after the other. Nowhere to the extent of what Mamoru\'s doin with Mize though! Gosh, im only human
Good luck manofdanger! Always a pleasure making stories with ur characters!
Good luck manofdanger! Always a pleasure making stories with ur characters!
# 1
Posted:
Nov 16 2005, 02:05 PM
Good to see you two back in the mix.
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MoD!!!! Seriously upping those skills! Backgrounds are phenominal and your characters look good too! I\'m really anticipating the next part of your story! You\'ve had probably one of the most consistant storylines going with your characters for the longest time and that in itself is very impressive.