I have to come to Rook\'s defense. I have tasted his milkshake, and to put it bluntly, it is amazing. It is rich and creamy, but still all the while smooth. As it slides down your throat, you get a warm sensation, but yet it is still frigidly awesome.

[sarcasm] yeah, sarcasm is cool. [/sarcasm]

Ha! That was pretty funny, Rookie. I guess I'm one of the few here that appreciates sarcasm in art. :p I mean, c'mon. Tentacle stuff is HIGH-LARIOUS.

Good stuff, even though there wasn't a real "fight" from either of you. Hehehe...

Dreaz: Nice story, hon. ^^  Very nice coloring in the first two pages, but too short @__@ and yes, even though it was only two days, its still good :3

Rookie: o-o;; Great art, but dude.. Been reading La Blue Girl? o_o;;  Thats the only turn off I have of yours is that its got hentai suggestions @__@ though I love his expressions on the first page xD

Great job the both of ya.

nuh uh! it was a pigment of her dream, that's why only the dream was in color, and why she said it was "such a colorful dream" afterwards, because it was pigmented instead of a figment

Dear.. I'm sorry. I didn't get time to develop a lot ( or think for that matter ) I jsut winged it. o_o

whoa.. i only get a headshot in one panel, fanta? T_T *hurt*

Both of you look as though you were in one helluva crunch--Zil's got a better story technically, but Rookie's got the visual punch to match--this could go either way from what I see.

Thanks you guys. ^_^;
I only had two days to do this like Kura said,~ So I'll try to fit in more time if I get a chance next time. ^_^;

Rookie - gimme a break.  Gratuitous milkshake scene?!?!  I love the art though, you still kick ass.  Loved the art dude and the first page made me laugh out loud.
Fan - not bad but....kinda lame, hun.  For one thing, it's 'figment' ;p, for another, what was up with the short and stout panels?  I guess you jsut got too busy and couldn't spend more time on it, eh?  Well hopefully next time you'll go all out, 'cause I know you rock more than this.

what the heck?  It's like neither of you guys actually fought...

Zil: You know that's pretty damn good considering you did that in only 2 days.  It was a little spaztic but I understood what was going on at the end.  It was a little on the short side though...

Rookie: Gorgeous quality.......but the entire thing made no sense.  Been on a hentai high lately?  Seems like it.  Implied porn isn't gonna win my vote for this.

my vote goes to Rookie on quality department. Not by much though! Not that I'm saying that Fantasy's bad, its just kinda hard to follow and the color contrast.

I thought I kinda gave you equal mark on creativity and entertainment.

Keep it up.

I lost. o_o
DAMN YO FINALS. ( and my parents forcing me to study and ban me from drawing. >_> )

omfg, I don't even have TIME for this. what am I gonna doooo~ I haven't even done ONE PAGE yet, NOT EVEN CLOSE. DAMMIT FUCKING FINALS.

Good luck to the both of you!

Dreaz, I look forward to you kicking some ass.

"oh snap"