Mr. Kick vs. Draco

Mr. Kick vs. Draco

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Johnny Blaque
Artist
96 comments
# 15  
Draco, you did a great job!  I agree some of the movements were alittle stiff(Like the kick on the 3rd page was alittle wonky too) and there were some perspective problems(We all get those though) it came out well.  Sorry I didn't have my battle finished but I've posted the parts I did complete in the forums.  So sorry about defaulting.

mr. robot
Artist
133 comments
# 14  
real slicko, draco, nice overall except for the anatomy and position problems, like zato says... some of the layouts don't exactly flow, either, with all of the text hanging outside of panels.

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 13  
What happened Johnny? I'm guessing you do have something for us, but couldn't submit it... oh well...

Graphyte: Nice! The quality would of been higher from me had there been color and if the characters showed a little bit more power to there swings, you shouldn't be afraid to exagerate a pose if possible, if Draco is swinging straight across: Extend that harm to the side as far as possible man! But still, the line art is second to none, and I found the storyline to be quite enjoyable to be honest.

You may have some low scores right now man, but don't fret it, I think you did a pretty kick ass job man! Keep it up or something?

A Bad Idea
Artist
320 comments
# 12  
SPOO ON YOU JOHNNY >_O

I was hoping to see some colored work from Draco, but I suppose I can put a grade on this. The linework is good, it seems you have good control of inks. Agreed, the upward angles are kinda wonky, but those are really REALLY hard angles to get, so it's understandable that you haven't gotten the hang of them yet. In fact, the perspective in general seems a little off in comparison to the figures (page 3, frame 4). There are a few instances in your anatomy that just look REALLY painful >_O (Page 1, bottom left frame, Draco's upside-down left hand, and the kick on page three).

I'm looking forward to your next fight. Keep it up !

jord-Y
17 comments
# 11  
ashame you couldn't enter a fight! Was really looking foward to see mr. Kick in action...

draco: nice one.. but i dislike the black space between the panels..

Graphyte Ronin
Artist
113 comments
# 10  
Forgot to mention... critiques of my side of the battle are quite welcome, seeing how this is the first battle sequence I've taken seriously... also, I took some risks in a few panels angle-wise, namely the ones in the first couple of pages with the camera looking up...

Graphyte Ronin
Artist
113 comments
# 9  
Sorry to hear that, man... no wonder I couldn't get in touch over AIM.  I hope we'll get to see what you've done, nonetheless-- heck, if you manage to get that cleared up within the next week, I'll ask the council to reset the voting.

Johnny Blaque
Artist
96 comments
# 8  
Sorry man, the same virus has struck my computer a-fucking-gain!  I just couldn't fix it in time to finish out battle.

Graphyte Ronin
Artist
113 comments
# 7  
Uploaded at last... I put it off too much and I wasn't able to give it proper shading.  Oh well, I think I did a real solid job on the lineart for this one.

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 6  
Ronin has an extension

Graphyte Ronin
Artist
113 comments
# 5  
Going to get an extension for this battle.  It would be pretty awkward if I don't finish the computer-related work before I head back to college, so I'm doing it all next week.

Pixelchop
Artist
139 comments
# 4  
I would like 2 see ass kickery on both sides please. good luck 2 u both

Rookie
Artist
74 comments
# 3  
give em hell, kick!

Johnny Blaque
Artist
96 comments
# 2  
Who says Kick doesn't know how to use a weapon?  He He Heeeeee

Graphyte Ronin
Artist
113 comments
# 1  
Hmm.  Feels kind of awkward how Draco's up against someone who doesn't have a weapon.

Well.  I'll think of something... Draco does like a fair fight, after all, and would conceivably fight weaponless when not helping the research team.

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Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Jan 18th, 2005
Votes Cast: 16
Page Views: 1114
Winner: Graphyte Ronin
 

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