Traveler vs. Ayako & Fluffbucket

Traveler vs. Ayako & Fluffbucket

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by endjoi

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P!TT
17 comments
# 15  
haha! that 'raged' fluffbuket was funny! cheap shield part, but still passes for me, is ayakos endin where traveler goes back to the 1700-1800's?

mrcrypt
20 comments
# 14  
The Traveler pages (again) had a nice flow ...although, yes.  The shield was pretty cheap ;)  Good comedy, too.  Very entertaining.
Ayako&Fluffbucket pages were a bit abrupt.  You should have finished himoff ;)  Funny, though ...I enjoyed it.
Good luck!

Tronix
Artist
138 comments
# 13  
well. in my opinion ayako's bath has no point.. don't undertand why a zombie takes a bath. i goes in this one fully with traveler.

mr. robot
Artist
133 comments
# 12  
aw cool! nice fight, endjoi, i think you made trav better than i've seen anyone else do it.

mr. impossible
Artist
96 comments
# 11  
great scott!! i loved em both! lookin good!

parkbench
7 comments
# 10  
ohh ayako naked...im feeling necrophilic....
great stuff from both of you, endjoi - the last page looks a lil rushed, but other than that great stuff.  mr.robot - haha exact same thing, you last page looks a lil rushed and like you even said its kinda cheap how she dies and how he doesnt, but good stuff from the both of you

zombi
Artist
334 comments
# 9  
lol @ ayako cute stuff. a bit unclear towards the end though.
nice art from Traveler, and cool fight. love how u did Fluffbecket

A Bad Idea
Artist
320 comments
# 8  
Mr. Robot : Wow, excellent fight, this one. I especially love the shading, your coloring skills have come a long way since you first signed up here. The only thing I would suggest to improve your colors is to learn how to apply textures to objects, like grass. You should also try to grasp a better sense of direction for your readers. The motions should be consistant in angle, instead of jumping cameras every other frame (i.e., the sequence when Trav draws his gun to shoot down Fluffs, Fluff snuck up on Trav from the left, Trav pulls his gun out facing right, fires facing right (closeup) and barrages Fluffs facing left). Otherwise, keep up the good work !

endjoi : Dammit, Ayako is making me a necrophile XP. Simple script, but well written and nicely paced. Great artwork too, as usual. The lack of backgrounds is preventing me from giving you a B+, but it's not TOO detracting...well, maybe for the last frame; if it weren't for those other text bubbles you'd have NO idea what happened to Trav. Keep it up luvvs ! ^3^

Wei Ingnan
Artist
597 comments
# 7  
mr.robot: as always you continue to improve with each strip great job...I always look forward to seeing each new match
endjoi: like I said before this one really impressed me I really loved it.....page one and two were fabulous

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 6  
*hugs Mr.Robot*  OMFG, THANK YOU FOR SUBMITTING SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!!!*dies*  Awesome job my friend ^_~

mr. impossible
Artist
96 comments
# 5  
hey guys good luck here! ican't wait ta see who wins this one

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 4  
alrighty I just submitted my stuff....please don't default!!!!!!!!!!!

TypoDemon
Artist
144 comments
# 3  
XD!! EEE ^_^ Good luck guys!

mr. robot
Artist
133 comments
# 2  
yeah, I'll cry if either of us defaults, too. God damn, I am fighting too many good artists.

endjoi
Artist
77 comments
# 1  
Oooh, this should be a fun one ^_^   And to make things even better I'll be done with Armageddon!  So don't default, or I'll cry!

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Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Sep 23rd, 2004
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