Traveler vs. Ayako & Fluffbucket
Critiques & Comments
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17 comments
# 15
haha! that 'raged' fluffbuket was funny! cheap shield part, but still passes for me, is ayakos endin where traveler goes back to the 1700-1800's?
# 14
The Traveler pages (again) had a nice flow ...although, yes. The shield was pretty cheap Good comedy, too. Very entertaining.
Ayako&Fluffbucket pages were a bit abrupt. You should have finished himoff Funny, though ...I enjoyed it.
Good luck!
Ayako&Fluffbucket pages were a bit abrupt. You should have finished himoff Funny, though ...I enjoyed it.
Good luck!
# 13
well. in my opinion ayako's bath has no point.. don't undertand why a zombie takes a bath. i goes in this one fully with traveler.
# 12
aw cool! nice fight, endjoi, i think you made trav better than i've seen anyone else do it.
# 11
great scott!! i loved em both! lookin good!
# 10
ohh ayako naked...im feeling necrophilic....
great stuff from both of you, endjoi - the last page looks a lil rushed, but other than that great stuff. mr.robot - haha exact same thing, you last page looks a lil rushed and like you even said its kinda cheap how she dies and how he doesnt, but good stuff from the both of you
great stuff from both of you, endjoi - the last page looks a lil rushed, but other than that great stuff. mr.robot - haha exact same thing, you last page looks a lil rushed and like you even said its kinda cheap how she dies and how he doesnt, but good stuff from the both of you
# 9
lol @ ayako cute stuff. a bit unclear towards the end though.
nice art from Traveler, and cool fight. love how u did Fluffbecket
nice art from Traveler, and cool fight. love how u did Fluffbecket
# 8
Mr. Robot : Wow, excellent fight, this one. I especially love the shading, your coloring skills have come a long way since you first signed up here. The only thing I would suggest to improve your colors is to learn how to apply textures to objects, like grass. You should also try to grasp a better sense of direction for your readers. The motions should be consistant in angle, instead of jumping cameras every other frame (i.e., the sequence when Trav draws his gun to shoot down Fluffs, Fluff snuck up on Trav from the left, Trav pulls his gun out facing right, fires facing right (closeup) and barrages Fluffs facing left). Otherwise, keep up the good work !
endjoi : Dammit, Ayako is making me a necrophile XP. Simple script, but well written and nicely paced. Great artwork too, as usual. The lack of backgrounds is preventing me from giving you a B+, but it's not TOO detracting...well, maybe for the last frame; if it weren't for those other text bubbles you'd have NO idea what happened to Trav. Keep it up luvvs ! ^3^
endjoi : Dammit, Ayako is making me a necrophile XP. Simple script, but well written and nicely paced. Great artwork too, as usual. The lack of backgrounds is preventing me from giving you a B+, but it's not TOO detracting...well, maybe for the last frame; if it weren't for those other text bubbles you'd have NO idea what happened to Trav. Keep it up luvvs ! ^3^
# 7
mr.robot: as always you continue to improve with each strip great job...I always look forward to seeing each new match
endjoi: like I said before this one really impressed me I really loved it.....page one and two were fabulous
endjoi: like I said before this one really impressed me I really loved it.....page one and two were fabulous
# 6
*hugs Mr.Robot* OMFG, THANK YOU FOR SUBMITTING SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!!!*dies* Awesome job my friend ^_~
# 5
hey guys good luck here! ican't wait ta see who wins this one
# 4
alrighty I just submitted my stuff....please don't default!!!!!!!!!!!
# 3
XD!! EEE ^_^ Good luck guys!
# 2
yeah, I'll cry if either of us defaults, too. God damn, I am fighting too many good artists.
# 1
Oooh, this should be a fun one ^_^ And to make things even better I'll be done with Armageddon! So don't default, or I'll cry!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks
Ended:
Sep 23rd, 2004
Votes Cast:
26
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1317
Winner:
mr. robot
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