he was killled, check out the origin...
CONGRATS DUDE. Even though u won by default who gives a F**K.

very good entry  hope to see more from mrs robison.. and ..where's MR robinson??

*pops*

Yeah i realise i lack a lil in that comic-book-action dynamics department, especially on that first page! As for length of the story (number of pages) i had to keep it to a minimum for the time being - had projects due in on the same battle submission deadline. That's also the reason why it was quasi-grayscale - originally it was meant to full-colored, but time (the bastard foster-father that it is!) would not permit.
As for my usual Silent Hill-esque art, i just thought it wudn't have fit the tone i was looking for for this story.

Anyways, respect to Molotov & Latem - she was in the first battle i ever read here in Void.

Kudos for all ur 2cents!! *goes to candy store to buy sum lollies*

that sux

i was really plannin to finish this weekend, oh well.

Dan doesnt have a mustache or mullet last I checked...... and isnt a whore...... Think it was just random dream dude.

Interesting story, Fanta.

Was that Dan in the hot tub?  Hahaha, in her dream!

Zato nailed what needed to be... nailed... or something?

Fanta-dude: Interesting first page, Zato pretty much nailed what you needed to bring into your comic. But I say that you need to give us more than grey tones and only a couple of colors. That's my only art complaint, other than that Mrs. Robinson has a lot of good personality behind her! Good marks from me!


Anywho, despite a no-show this one was a good read! Keep it up or something?

oh yeah, UVE BEEN PUNKING OUT ALOT LATELY MOLOTOV!! U NEED SOME ASS WHOPPIN!!

*sigh* i love lesbians
but shallowness aside, that was a pretty damn good entry. like zato said, some depth would have been cool, maybe making it a page longer. and the lesbo action is hot

HERE COMES THE ZATO BOMB >_O

It's really a shame we couldn't see your regular Silent Hill-esque grunginess this round, but that lack doesn't detract from this fight at all. The single colors against the black & white is always a very nice touch, and I must say you've rocked it well. You've got a nice handle on frame arrangement and composition, but my only REAL problem art-wise is that some of the camera angles look a bit static. For example, in the frame of Latem's hunny after Robinson breaks in you could have applied a more dramatic camera angle, perhaps a closeup of some sort. Another example, where Latem smashes Robinson with her guitar, some EXTREME angles and forshortening would really brought out the impact of the attack; the thing to remember with fight sequences is that you want the fight to be DYNAMIC and kinda LEAP OUT OF THE PAGE for the reader, so always try to keep in mind "what would make this frame more exciting ?".

Your story was quite compelling, and it's always good to remind us that Latem actually HAD a story to begin with XP. My only complaint (though you shouldn't take this to heart) is that it seemed too short for me. I'd have liked to have seen a longer, deeper exchange of dialogue between Latem and Robinson in the dream sequence, as of now I didn't really have enough content to connect with either character. And (just so I know I'm not thinking wrong), is that implied lesbianism at the end ?? >_O

In any case, you look like you're off to a good start ! I hope to see more work from you (perhaps CHALLENGE you one of these days ^_~)

Man this must be annoying Fanta.
Excelent FLash-ing

Hot lesbians

lesbians

You'll see a confirmation after they go through. If you didn't see that, you better ask Toast if he got them in the uploads folder or not.

whats due next week? ur work or the battle?

btw, how do i know if my pages were submitted correctly? Or if they were submitted at all??

LOL just found out it was due in NEXT WEEK! *sigh of relief*

You damn well better not have FANTA. Or i'ma gonna ring yer neck boy yeehaw *rides a donkey*

Man, i didn't turn up to class today (and consequently didn't hand in my assessment task and make my presentation) coz i was finishing up these pages! Well, stick a fork in me: i'm done. My first Void battle submitted. I await the reliable Zato for his thorough review.
Can't wait to see ur pages Molotov!!

haha, phillip you're so corny. I can't wait to see how this fight turns out, especially Molotov's side. <3 Good luck to you both.

*takes lid off hand lotion*

*positions hands*

whenever u guys are ready

Or do I mean Raaawr!

Meow...

show me some lesbianisms!

Molotov, can't wait 2 c ur curvaceous rendering of mrs robinson!
Best of luck!

I'm sure these 2 Vixens of Violence are sharpening their claws as we speak...

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

A psycotic man killer fighting a rock and roll woman with no soul! I think I'm falling in love all over again!