Daku man, I see some progress here, but I think some shading would help you out lots, man
Zato, the idea of teaming with you grows more appealing by each pro-style comic you produce. Wonderful humor too
Daku vs. Violent Kei
Critiques & Comments
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# 14
Ah, awsome work Zato, the tones tossed in and the perspective on some panels look awwwwwwwsome. Your paneling seems all..junked up together though. Kainsword, you're fights are improving. ^^ good luck boyos.
# 13
Reign, James fell off the building, and got snagged on a light poll. Poor resolution muffed it all up, but he landed there, caught by his jacket, looks like... while pissing on Daku (SOMEONE OTHER THAN ME THANK GOD!)
# 12
Daku - you're getting better - keep it up.
Zato - great battle. Your tonework is killin me. I love how animated everything looks. Good stuff.
Zato - great battle. Your tonework is killin me. I love how animated everything looks. Good stuff.
# 11
kains..you improve a lot from your last fight!, i'll give you good points for that.. just that zato have a lot of more exp. than you. keep hunting the hunters!!
# 10
Daku's work is defenetly improving!
Daku: Well I'll admit that you've improved, but some more hardcore practice bettween or durring fights can't hurt! You're showing a bit more story in this comic, trying to humor it out is always good. Like spikes said however, you need to resize these badboys, and find a better text!
Zato: This also looks better than your last fight, I believe it's because you shaded this comic instead of leaving it at black and white (bonus points), pretty interesting take on this battle, some parts remind me of FLCL defenetly (anthrax) but nothing wasn't too razzle dazzle for me (except the art). My vote goes to you nontheless!
Lots of improvement Kainsword! Keep at it and don't give up! Keep it up or something?
Daku: Well I'll admit that you've improved, but some more hardcore practice bettween or durring fights can't hurt! You're showing a bit more story in this comic, trying to humor it out is always good. Like spikes said however, you need to resize these badboys, and find a better text!
Zato: This also looks better than your last fight, I believe it's because you shaded this comic instead of leaving it at black and white (bonus points), pretty interesting take on this battle, some parts remind me of FLCL defenetly (anthrax) but nothing wasn't too razzle dazzle for me (except the art). My vote goes to you nontheless!
Lots of improvement Kainsword! Keep at it and don't give up! Keep it up or something?
# 9
ZATO you are quickly reaching epicness
DAKU fucking LEAPS AND BOUNDS from your last fight. i think your pages would look infinitely better if you just resized them and made them smaller. and yeah, photoshop text, or just snazzier written text wouldnt hurt
DAKU fucking LEAPS AND BOUNDS from your last fight. i think your pages would look infinitely better if you just resized them and made them smaller. and yeah, photoshop text, or just snazzier written text wouldnt hurt
# 8
zato: you never cease to amaze me. every time you post a fight you push your bar up just a little higher. you are quickly becoming a force to be reckoned with.
kainsword:you look like you have a good handle on drawing your own character in several poses, which is good. however, there are some issues with your real anatomy, and by that i mean most of Kei's poses. i think with a little more time and practice, you'll get better, but for now, my points have to go with zato.
whatever you do, don't give up. giving up is for pansies.
kainsword:you look like you have a good handle on drawing your own character in several poses, which is good. however, there are some issues with your real anatomy, and by that i mean most of Kei's poses. i think with a little more time and practice, you'll get better, but for now, my points have to go with zato.
whatever you do, don't give up. giving up is for pansies.
# 7
wahahahah funny story on violent kei's behalf. Dont quite understand what happened to James at the end though. You've improved alot Daku, keep it up, maybe add some shading in to give ur characters a little bit of dimension. good luck to both of u! =D
# 6
WoHO first one to vote! Finally it pays of to draw all night.
Kainsword: i'm seeing improvement here. maybe try using something like photoshop for the dialog, it might make it a bit clearer. Very wierd story btw I like that.
Zato: damn boy, you're getting pretty good pretty fast. I'm impressed. The story wasn't all that but the art is awesome. One thing though: maybe your pages could be a little lager? It would make then clearer and the texts easier to read.
Kainsword: i'm seeing improvement here. maybe try using something like photoshop for the dialog, it might make it a bit clearer. Very wierd story btw I like that.
Zato: damn boy, you're getting pretty good pretty fast. I'm impressed. The story wasn't all that but the art is awesome. One thing though: maybe your pages could be a little lager? It would make then clearer and the texts easier to read.
# 5
Uploaded 7/16
# 4
I sense a reaaaaaally strange battle here... But what the heck!
Zato, do me proud.
Zato, do me proud.
# 3
CEASE YOUR NONSENSE PANTY-MAN.
# 2
werd, zato is horny!
# 1
Hey kainsword, I admire your enthusiasm for challenging me. Looking forward to a good fight !
YOU GET CRUSH NOW.
YOU GET CRUSH NOW.
Regular Match
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4 weeks
Ended:
Jul 22nd, 2004
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19
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you dont know how fucking proud i am of both of you, specially you daku... we nearly kicked yer ass out, but you've proved yerself BEYOND A DOUBT that you will be great here.
KEEP IT UP !!