You really did a good job on this one wei. The story had a nice flow to it. This is the best work I've seen you do! Can't wait to see more man

oh....and the bald guy...his back has been broken....at least that was what I was going for

thanks fer the good and thank you very much for the bad, people.....yup you hit home on the things I know I need to work on.....colour and backgrounds....no argument there...I just hope to continue pushing myself and developing....hopefully this story arc will allow me to do so

Not a bad read.  This will set up another battle nicely!
Your art's pretty nice, too
dig it

Awsome work, yo. I'l really digging the idea of it all. <3 I do think you should put in more depth in your coloring. ya'know- more darker tones and shit.

Hey man you have some skills.
I really really like the detail you put on this.
Keep it up dude!

Wow, thats some amazing artwork you have there o.o Good job on the short comic ^^ *claps*

Pretty good stuff.  My main beefs are with the coloring and perspective.
With the coloring - everything looked about the same - skin, metal, everything.  Different materials reflect light in different ways.  You've shown this a bit with the subtle highlights on the metal, but you need to sex it up some.  Even the sparks look pretty dull, colorwise.  Also, the coloring didn't show any of the form.  You've got spheres and cylinders, which are usually home runs to color, but you've shaded them as little more than flat.
As for the perspective, you know you need work there.  Its all about backgrounds, man!  Without a solid establishing shot in the beginning, they're just floating in some haze somewhere.  You've got to sell the setting in order to really involve the reader.
The figures and storytelling worked great, however.  Hey - email me the inks to page 4, and I'll color it to show you what I'm talking about.  Laters.

Really good job on this Wei.......by beefs are as Zombie said with the angle......also, the Mjo is holdthing that guy, he shouldn't be bent that far back unless Mjo grabbed him by his stomach, his back would have to be broken to be bent that far.....also, where the crotch guard is, I see that you missed the lines for his leg, althought that isn't the problem, you had the leg curve in to much and that caused it to look really thin....um, other then that, awesome job man, I enjoyed reading it.

that was pretty kool man i like it alot. im loving that little robot, funny as hell. hope to do battle with you one day soon.

MAN! THAT IS SOME DETAILED ART!
all is cool man, i like how the pill robo speaks. and the art was topnotch dude
the last page however, i didnt like that angle at all. sorry man
u could have picked a better angle and not have left so much empty space, and the people dont like like theyre floating in space rather than standing or running away
but AWESOME STUFF on the rest of the pages.
also noticed u dont use hard hilites or shadows. try that in some panels where u want a dramatic effect or smth. maybe try the hilites more on Mjonlririnig , since he's covered in metal and all.
but awesome stuff dude

Very good job!  I can't wait to see more......ya know, that little robot dude reminds me of the robot computer on Outlaw Star.  Excellent, keep it up!

bald guy's spine got <b>owned</b>.

haha jk. Good stuff dude. Love the comedic atmosphere at the beginning.

o_o honestly guy, im very impressed. I always liked your posing anatomy skills x_x this just reinforces that for me..
XD I really like the little guy makes me wanna hug him, can't wait to see more of this saga

Well it took me long enough.....but here it is.....lemme know what you all think please.....feel free to be as harsh as possible