Thank you to all readers and all who commented/ gave critique.
I’m glad you guys find that my art has improved, I try to improve everyday. Now I just have to figure out good writing, so now I’m going to try triple super extra hard and improve that aspect as well.
Once again, thanks a bunch!
Rumble Roulette / ChickenMannUltra vs. Harvey
Critiques & Comments
# 7
Posted:
Aug 14 2019, 11:33 AM
# 6
Posted:
Aug 11 2019, 03:48 PM
Boo: Hey man, these backgrounds are really good, especially in the first couple of pages! It gets a little wonky in the last panel of page 6, where the floor tiles don't quite match up to the perspective you've got Harvey in. I will say your expressions amuse me, and the joke about Harvey being completely unfazed by Egg Dealer and his attacks as he lectures the Dealer on how to run a store was my favorite moment in the whole thing and got an honest chuckle out of me lol. Crit-wise, while I think you've gotten the hang of the more extreme body shape of Egg Dealer, you could still use some work on t he thinner body types--this is most noticeable in the last panel of page 5, where Harvey's spine kinda looks broken.
# 5
Posted:
Aug 9 2019, 11:14 AM
Boogy: artquality wise this is getting better! You improve in anatomy mostly noticable on Harvey and your faces.
Storywise... Eggdealer has a fixed theme but starting with eggs, egging around and ending with eggs over every page get a bit boring to me. So i suggest maybe work a little on your writing. Try to build some anticipation, give your opponents a little more substance. This could be so much more funny/entertaining if there would be some rhytm to the egg beat.
Sure he is a joke/fun character (i hope) but even that can suffer from overdosed elements.
Storywise... Eggdealer has a fixed theme but starting with eggs, egging around and ending with eggs over every page get a bit boring to me. So i suggest maybe work a little on your writing. Try to build some anticipation, give your opponents a little more substance. This could be so much more funny/entertaining if there would be some rhytm to the egg beat.
Sure he is a joke/fun character (i hope) but even that can suffer from overdosed elements.
# 4
Posted:
Aug 8 2019, 02:38 PM
I don't know how to Eggplain what happened here, but this was the most eggcellent comic about Eggs i have egger read
# 3
Posted:
Aug 8 2019, 08:42 AM
Boogidibzdo: The nonsensical nature of your comics always amaze me hahahahjdha
Good job on this one! (i wanna have a battle with egg dealer now)
Good job on this one! (i wanna have a battle with egg dealer now)
# 2
Posted:
Jul 17 2019, 01:52 AM
Egg is meant to be great conditioner for hair
# 1
Posted:
Jul 16 2019, 08:45 AM
Haircuts and omelettes
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks + 1
Ended:
Aug 14th, 2019
Votes Cast:
14
Page Views:
1997
Winner:
BoogidiBzdo
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