My only crit is I feel like Gargonne feels slightly out of character, mainly she just comes off more aggressive than i have seen her in other comics.
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Flutterbyes:There are some digital flats (corrections?) that stand out against the grain of the analog medium. Applying a texture of your paper of choice over them might help integrate them.
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Yeah, I went over some marks and touched up the odd bit of colour. Looking back I totally could've been more subtle with these corrections. I also regret just going over all the boarders in such a harsh white. I'm still getting the hang of transerring a traditional comics to digital, this was absolutely a learning experience.
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Mr. Kent: Man I really hope these four actually get to be roommates, the way you depicted their interaction is so much fun! I wish it was longer cuz the end felt a bit abrupt and I could just read about them for days. The punch line was hilarious though XD
Flytee: I LOVE your colors! And I loved all the little jokes throughout the comic, and the overall tone was just... so good. Rae and Blue are so good I hope their stay in Void keeps going well for them!!