Kazue L. Burns vs. Gwen & Regi

Kazue L. Burns vs. Gwen & Regi

by 4P

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Crit level: No critique desired, comments encouraged

by Gregly

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Shen
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# 3   Posted: Jul 23 2019, 06:43 PM
energy: I hope Kazue learns something from Gwen and Regi in your story. Your characters are all so angry all the time, it would be nice to see someone work on their personal demons and take advice from other characters to try to improve their lives, rather than wallow in past misfortunes.

Gregly: Adorable as always! I love the magical girl rivalry! Gwen getting into potion making is a really clever idea, love a good old fashioned magical girl throwdown lol. I love the traditionals, but theres a lot of messy places where the marker streaked or the pencils werent entirely erased under the lines, i feel like some photoshop tweaking could have maybe fixed some of that. Otherwise, as always the writing is spot on and your style is energetic and appealing! Always love to see you in a battle!

Flytee
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# 2   Posted: Jul 23 2019, 10:32 AM
4p- pretty intense little scene. The facial consistency here is better then it has been in past comics.

Gregly- charming art and writing as usual, I'm such a fan of your work! I really liked the idea of Gwen replacing her magic with potions, that was a cool twist. Crits pretty minor- the colouring looked a bit rushed at times and it would've been nice to see the pencils rubbed out more.

      Edited Jul 23 2019,  10:32 AM by Flytee

Shen
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# 1   Posted: Jul 3 2019, 02:02 AM
OH I DIDNT SEE THIS!! HYPE!!

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