Bootcamp Round Robin: Set 1 / David Birch vs. Croco

Bootcamp Round Robin: Set 1 — David Birch vs. Croco

by Orion

50.2%
205 points
Page 1Page 2Page 3Page 4Page 5Page 6Page 7Page 8

Crit level: Open to any comments or critiques
tags: bootcamp, croco, David Birch, roundrobin, sewerlife, underground

49.8%
203 points
Page 1

Crit level: No preference
tags: bootcamp, croco, David Birch, roundrobin, sewerlife



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Orion
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# 8   Posted: May 9 2019, 08:55 PM
Thank you Crocostyle. I had a blast making this comic this round and look forward to your next! Good Luck!

Thank you for all the feedback on the comic. This round felt like a kick in the pants on what to expect and I am gonna bring that back around to make my next one even better!

Crocostyle
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# 7   Posted: May 9 2019, 08:33 PM
thanksso much for the crits, guys!  I def agree which is why i was so anxious about my submission.  I will definitely focus on better definition next match.  Orion, it was great battling you, and sorry you had so much interference in your scheduling
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Radji
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# 6   Posted: May 9 2019, 12:55 PM
 Stylo: i knew from the days you were only in incubator that you had a very paint-like style, it's very true here. Problem is,  it can look  very unfinished when done on a short notice, and  it's the case here, David Birch's comic is only some flat inks, but it look  more finished,  without taking the drawing skills into account. you have an interesteing budding style, but you need to polish it, in my opinion. i think you should train to do some regular digital painting by taking screenshot of disneys and  redoing those screenshots in digital paint, it's an exercise I did a lot at art school.

Orion. It's just flat inks with a lot a white, maybe too much of white, and the panel making need some work so that it look more dynamic and less chaotic


TheCydork
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# 5   Posted: May 9 2019, 03:58 AM
Orion: I really like the variety of angles and poses you use! They feel very natural and lead on to each other well. I think you should dial it back on the “overlapping” panels though (such as on pages 3,5 and 6) as it makes the pages feel cluttered and confusing, at least at this level of rendering.

Crocostyle: I like your style, it really lends itself to action and movement, but I agree with Elyan in that it was a little too sketchy and hard to follow. And I absolutely love the panel where Croco bites David’s arm but overall I feel like the fight could have been a bit more creative.

yarnwitch
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# 4   Posted: May 8 2019, 05:59 PM
Ooooh this was a neat matchup!
I absolutely love the humor in your writing, orion.
And stylo: ouch that kinda got croco in a sensitive spot, didnt it?

These stories are really neat and I like them a lot! IM LOOKING FORWARD TO FIGHTING BOTH OF YOU

Elyan
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# 3   Posted: May 8 2019, 12:36 PM
orion: i like your storytelling and the little things like david in the last page giving this a little kick. great job on finishing the entry up to this level. some more lineweight or some bolder black fill ins would have helped the overall look i think. the sudden black blocks in pg 6 were a little sudden and felt rather lonely/out of nowhere. its a nice visual contrast effect but in the minimalistic render here its a bit much exclusive for that page.

crocostyle: i must admit i would have liked it if there were some clearer overlying sketches there that would have made reading this a little clearer. with time so short you did a great job finishing up what you did but it was hard to follow on that level of sketchyness. other than that the plot wasn´t really enough to judge on. poor david :) btw a comic like this with finished quality would be crazy cool.

Desichan
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# 2   Posted: May 8 2019, 09:31 AM
VERY NICE COMICS YOU GUYS

Shen
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1266 comments
# 1   Posted: Apr 23 2019, 09:52 PM
MY BOY STYLO IS GONNA MESS YOU UP, SON!

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Type: Sparring Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: May 14th, 2019
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