QUARTER-DAY QUASI-LEGAL QUARREL / Invyn & Jasper vs. Tiffany

QUARTER-DAY QUASI-LEGAL QUARREL — Invyn & Jasper vs. Tiffany

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tags: airport, gray owl, invyn, jackie, jasper, Lilyfeather, not retribution, plane, police, talon, tiffany

by Bobo

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ArtsandGoodies
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# 6   Posted: Apr 5 2019, 09:32 PM
This is really cool to see you doing 6 hour challenge comic.

Reecer: you did really good on the storyboards here and the story in general, even though you only had six hours you managed to make it all have a solid foundation and interesting shots. good job.

bobo: You were super smart and economic with this comic and it's really cool how you managed to get it all colored and make the repeating panel work so well for you in this.

Desichan
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# 5   Posted: Apr 5 2019, 08:57 PM
I loved these comics so much

Reecer: I've never been a fan of political humor, even when fictional, but you figured out a way to rock it, and I greatly enjoyed it, I love how fluid your sketches are and your writing is really something to look up to! Also i am really glad you've been editing the colors of your borders they really make your comics look cohesive with how you've been editing the hues.

Bobo: I love the stillness humor of this comic it was a really fun read, and YEAH DANG GOOD WORK AMAZING Your art is amazing we need more Bobo art ;o; but life is important

Amazing work both of you, even if this was longer than six hours.

G.Lo
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94 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 30 2019, 04:30 PM
Reecer: I can’t get over your writing. I feel like I’m always cracking up when I read some Invyn and Jasper hijinks! I really loved their quick interaction with Tiffany.

Bobo: This was a cute little encounter and I think the infinite comic (is that what this is called?? I don’t know) format worked well with this story. Also Tiffany is cute as heck and I love how Jasper is of course the one that ends up finding the trouble with Tiffany!

William_Duel
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# 3   Posted: Mar 30 2019, 05:30 AM
It's a good thing to do these challenges.  To see how much you can get done in a short period of time.  I'm glad to see these popping up more.

Reecer6: What's interesting to me here is that despite the art your story is very clear.  There's good storyboarding here.  I imagine you'll just move forward but this looks like the beginning of what could be a polished comic because the foundation is complete.

Bobo: I see you're also experimenting with the infinite canvas.  And the use of repetition is effective.  It works to the personality of a character like Invyn.  It's also 'cost effective'.  Cost being time haha.  

Nice work guys.  I hope people do more.

yarnwitch
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277 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 30 2019, 04:41 AM
Great job in such a short amount of time, you two!

Happy June 19th! -Reecer6
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247 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 29 2019, 03:19 PM
ULTRA HYPER LIGHT SPEED STRIIIIIIIIIIIIFE

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Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Apr 5th, 2019
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