A jump to progress and improvement on P2. That first page was the baddest intro i seen in a while. Good mix of telling and fighting inbetween. A lil too much text not needed here and there, but the art lets it slide. Sometimes you overdo that face hiding in the shadow, makes you come off as if you didn't wanna do it even if it wasn't your intention. I'm enjoying this.
You made Rtv! look like a friendly human though, he'd talk like there's a dictinary imbedded in the brain. Ah, we all learn off of eachother....student :p bwahahaha.
Look forward for the Fenix thing...and our 2nd match.

Cross, first time i see something from you. That was kick ass. I see you're more focused on the action rather then the way you display it. You have original insight as for your choreography, but you might consider the way you display certain shots.
Your character has two things in common with mine...wich is a good enough reason to fight some day.

I loved this fukking match.

that was rtv talking,I just forgot to give him pupils is all

Nice stuff from bot of you.

Fel, Imma fan of your work, good stuff here man. One thing i noticed though. In your second page, the guy on the left said "well he may be a bit much for you, so maybe you should take Haiden with you as back up?" that guy who said that looked like P2 but it should have been the other guy saying it to P2. Am i right or am I seeing things?

Cross-  Haha that last frame i thought he was gonna say he was the demon that possessed Fenix, i guess the angle or colors or somethin reminded me of him. Besides that, I agree with everything thats been said. I'd like to battle ya sometime.

P2- That super-fly, only part i didnt dig was that the physical fight had no conclusion, it kinda left me hangin.

Thanks Fel, i dont know, i just wanted to go somewhere different with P2's other side. I liked your interpretation of CROSS, very cool.

good stuff both you guys
p2, the action wasnt quite as wild as it usually is, but its all good
gryph, ur style changed through out the fight, got a little more serious towards the end, which looked better in my opinon

great stuff

Dont care much for the Matrix rip-offs.  :/

P2- You already know what I think bro.

Oh, Gryphon, btw, I love your design for Cross.  The glasses, the white man\'s afro...everything\'s grade A!

Good work guys.  I really did enjoy both of your entries.

Cross.  Your stuff deff has a good base to it.  But the line work seems a bit faded...If you're not inking your stuff, maybe try to enhance the contrast a bit more after you scan it.  You had some good effects going through out the fight.  There's just something about your pacing that seemed a bit too quick.  I think if the first page at least started with some sort of introduction even if it were just in the form of narration from your character while he's punching P2 would have done a lot to set the scene and mood of the fight.

Fel.  You're stuff just keeps getting better man.  I really liked the way you did this fight.  The conversation b/w Rtv! and P2 was very well executed.  It set the scene and context for the action while not ruining the pacing.  If you had written the scenes in a more linear fashion then the beginning would have been a bit boring due to the text and the fight would have been to quick.  However, bouncing back and forth kept things fresh and moving at a nice pace.  Great work guys!

yep I sure did forget the scar on p2's face,due to me rushing it in last second.Sorry
Nice work for your first fight Cross,though you had a weird take on p2's other side

Most of his scars are being covered by his new swag...'cept his face scar. Technicalities aside, it's time for Doctor Z to go to work.

Cross - I lost my post when I hit 'Leave a Comment' instead of 'Post Comment' >.< so I'll be brief. Good flow, story needs some sense to it. Need to improve : anatomy (posing), perspective, dynamic, CG effects. Looking good so far, keep it up.

P2 - I'll have to write up more on the flow and layout of your comic, since it took such a drastic turn from your regular stuff. I see the direction you were going for, but for my tastes, it was a little too 'linear', if you know what I mean. It was hard to make out the action sequences since the frames looked the same, but I like the overall execution. It puts a very dramatic feel to the whole thing, especially at the end. And now some short pointers on everything else. Liked the coloring, motion needs to be more apparant. Overall, nicely done. Can't wait to see our fight.

How come P2 didn\'t have his scars in this match? Am I the only one who noticed? @_@

im all loaded up and ready to rock.

zen

yeah, i hope to kick some ass.

zen

Cross, looking forward to your first battle

yeah, finally get to see some stuff from Cross!!
Can't wait. Both two fighters with kick-ass styles

 Cross finally gets some action. Looks to be cool.