My Bloody Valentine / Remy Naufrage vs. Gossamer Swan

My Bloody Valentine — Remy Naufrage vs. Gossamer Swan

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Radji
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# 14   Posted: Feb 17 2019, 12:48 AM
ooooohhh moooonnn dieeuuuuuuuuu
Two french speaking voiders ! been some time !

Kozi: Damnnn, Remy's streetcred is rising by the comic ( and that's not a lot of comic, making it even more impressive )  psychological torture was already a trope of Remy (remenber kurt's cat) but we're reaching Cenobite level of sadism (for my greatest joy) His schtick of being near intouchable does shows its limits here with a character that can't be hurt easily ( thus giving us a delicious scene of Remy throwing a hissy fit) hmmmm.... better have Marie put him on the Shit List

Jcee: The difficulty of an adversary such as Remy is how to go around his power to hurt him. Which you handled very nicely. Remy is for me the worst foe for most of Voiders because of his devious power set.  Very high paced and nicely cut comic.

Julz
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# 13   Posted: Feb 13 2019, 05:14 PM
Damn, both of these comics are incredible.
Kozi: This is like a psychological thriller! The introduction had me hooked immediately. I loved the dynamic with the swan carving and the missing person fiasco. Great touch. Color scheme and lineart are working wonders. No accounting for taste XD very clever dialogue. Page 6 is a, amazingly illustrated scuffle sequence. Awesome job there. The transitions really bring it home too. The plot is just so thrilling in this comic. Watching swan lose hope was so super sad DX  Then the payoff on pg 19. Beautiful panels here btw. Excellent ending <333
JCEE: Pretty basic character meet up. Dialogue is very natural. It was very cool that she came to the realization that he has to see her.  I love how quippy swan is, just making jokes til the end haha. Good stuff. I love your line art, and how you'd sometimes outline something in blue or white letting it pop.
Great scar match!! One of my favorites for sure and it's only February?? Let's keep it up, yeah??

Fred v2.0.1
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# 12   Posted: Feb 13 2019, 10:54 AM
Yes. Very good.

Bobo
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# 11   Posted: Feb 13 2019, 10:13 AM
Fucking amazing, both of you! It was fun to read two amazing monochromatic comics with an accent color by two artists who are amazing at it. Kozi, I love how smoothly you included other VOID characters into Swan's part of the story, and watching that transformation from Swan's fighting spirit to her wasting away to almost nothing was chilling. Jay, I really appreciate the way you gave Remy the upper hand and made Swan feel somewhat powerless until she figured out his weakness. It's always good to see artists willing to let their characters lose, even if they win in the end. Also thanks for the cameo ;)

I don't have time to give a really in-depth critique, but I have to say your comics are almost perfect. You both had spots where the first speech bubble you intended me to read was lower in the panel, so my natural reading order put the speech bubbles backwards, but that's easy enough to figure out. Jay, I'm actually not sure what the last panel on the second to last page is showing. I don't know if that's my problem or if it's something you could have done better, but just be sure to think about your dumb readers and make things as clear as possible (unless they're supposed to be unclear ofc).

Seriously guys, this was amazing, and I wouldn't be surprised if it even ended up in the running for battle of the year for 2019. You both have such strong, three dimensional characters, and that adds so much to my enjoyment of your comics. <3

      Edited Feb 13 2019,  10:17 AM by Bobo

William_Duel
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# 10   Posted: Feb 13 2019, 08:14 AM
Too real Kozi haha

Astro Sean
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# 9   Posted: Feb 12 2019, 09:41 AM

Perfect soundtrack for this comic

JCee
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# 8   Posted: Feb 12 2019, 03:02 AM
SUBMITTED

Oooooh boy, there'd been SO many ups and downs during the past few weeks, but it is DONE.

I cannot wait to see your side Kozi! This is gonna be one crazy valentines scar match!

      Edited Feb 12 2019,  03:02 AM by JCee

PyrasTerran
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# 7   Posted: Feb 5 2019, 09:10 PM
reminder that Scar Matches will now add +1 point to your total score if you win said match

Camel
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# 6   Posted: Jan 18 2019, 10:47 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tVj-fc1M_D0

Astro Sean
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305 comments
# 5   Posted: Jan 16 2019, 08:48 AM
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GODS

Astrodile
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90 comments
# 4   Posted: Jan 16 2019, 12:33 AM
YOOOOOOO BIG HYPE BIG HYPE

Shen
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# 3   Posted: Jan 16 2019, 12:29 AM
MAXIMUM HYPE

Kozispoon
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# 2   Posted: Jan 16 2019, 12:27 AM
RETRIBUTION! :DDD

Also the most advance notice of NSFW for violence, gore and mature themes.

JCee
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349 comments
# 1   Posted: Jan 16 2019, 12:27 AM
RETRIBUTION

....with that, here we go!

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