still not enough action?....i\'ve been thinking mebbe it\'s the panelling...too much open space and sorta dull....uggh I hated rushin this and now I can\'t even look at it any more....yer on fer that rematch Rtv!...once I get a clean slate

I used this effect before in the Sdt only.
What place with windows? Are you sure that was me?

Hehe, I like the little flying robot guy. It's definitly a cool concept. He's like the 3PO to you're dude's R2D2.

RTV, I agree with Jar on this one. EXCELLENT art, totally awsome angles and cool perspective distortion! It's just too friggen hard to see You should try cranking up the contrast in whatever you scanned this it. It would pay off so well.

both fights were good. and entertaning. the only thing that bother me was that rtv panels looked blurry. but all was good on both part good job to the both of you.

I'm gunna have to counter attack that comment, Jar. I really like Rtv!'s 'smudgy' style, it gives his comics more character or something. Sides, I don't see any major hand smudges that actually take away from the focal points of the comic.
Nice first fight Mjolinir, the poses and anatomy are really good, but the action frames don't seem to....actiony. They need motion somewhere in there, they just look too still.

Yeah somehow when i do 2/3 day work i get smudges wich i cant get rid off. Anyone knows how? Welcome to share, lol

Wei your ink isn't as crappy as you said so. A lil empty, but you had jut as lil time as i had. I like the confrontation. And the pace you took.

This isn't over, you agreed.

RTV man...you HAVE TO STOP making your linework BLURRY!!!  It\'s killing it man...

well it ain\'t finished and it ain\'t a s good as it coulda been but at least it was in on time

sorry Rtv!...this ain\'t gonna be my best stuff...I\'m really having problems with this one...I\'ll be lucky if I finish...but whatever I got I\'ll post

i ain\'t gonna do another six-page battle for a while...this things a beast

3 days left. I think i should get started.

tick tock tick tock...shut off the goddamn clock

hmmmm...4 weeks...6 pages...Rtv!..first VOID fight....well this should be quite the trial by fire