Mildred vs. Doanna Donut

Mildred vs. Doanna Donut

by Nothin

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ArtsandGoodies
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# 5   Posted: Nov 28 2018, 10:43 PM
Nothin: I didn't know you did this and the other comic in 7 hours, that's really good for that time span. also i enjoy the way you draw characters and their expressions. It's cool that this was a sort of origin story for mildred but I felt like there may have been a bit more needed for the resolution. still seeing all these comics from you is really nice.

MRPR: good job on implementing more background shots, you're doing good varying up your shots more, as you do more shots with backgrounds you will get better at them but it's good to see you add them. I like the format you have been doing for your comics since I feel this changed it up enough to be entertaining in a different way. I like what you have been doing and look forward to seeing more.

Nothin
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# 4   Posted: Nov 26 2018, 12:26 AM
@ heathen: yeah I can do better but I did this and vs cutie mark both from start to finish in 7 hours so I think I did alright considering

@ yarn: yeah it is kind of a "that's a thing" but I like that kind of humor

@radji: what else was I supposed to do with a fading star and a demon??? besides I wanted to give Mildred some origins so *shrug*

      Edited Nov 26 2018,  12:27 AM by Nothin

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# 3   Posted: Nov 25 2018, 11:03 PM
Nothin: I'm not sure why you took on two battles at the same time, but neither of them got the attention they deserved. This is certainly a better effort than Cutie Mark got, but I know you can do much, much better than this.

Mrpr1993: This comic was basically the same as Doanna vs Dr. Freakinstyle. Doanna finds herself in a situation against her will, she tries and fails repeatedly to get out of it, and then her antagonist unceremoniously dumps her.

The gag with her frosting coming off in the tub was cute, and the interior shot of her apartment was a nice choice.  

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# 2   Posted: Nov 25 2018, 10:07 AM
Oh neat.
okay well, nothin, i loved the purples, but again, this comes off as rushed. still good stuff. the last panel is somewhat anticlimactic? maybe i missed the humor. its kinda like "haha that was a thing". which is fine and good humor, but it hit me funny. i still love mildred, so i hope to see more of her around.

MRPR the punchline is good, but i think you're having the same issues as nothin, it comes off as rushed. which is all good for fun? i am still getting this persistent personality from doannah which is nice but i think the way she goes about things is becoming a little flat? maybe its just the frequency i've seen her recently and how she's handling the conflict in the comics. either way~ still a good entry. keep pushing yourself!

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# 1   Posted: Nov 22 2018, 02:43 PM
both comics are a BIT similar but they have their own shtick

Nothin: It's very classic. maybe a bit too much? It's not original. and while I can picture Doanna make a deal with a demon out of great, I wanted to see more.

MrPr: Doanna sure has hilarious reactions to the most surreal of situations. Some close up are a bit hard to read tho, but I had a good laugh.

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Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Nov 28th, 2018
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