Nothin vs. Mister Kent

Nothin vs. Mister Kent

by Nothin

Nothin56.5%
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Mister Kent43.5%
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Desichan
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# 7   Posted: Sep 21 2018, 06:58 PM
Sorry to take so long to comment, I've been dying, but I really wanted to comment, cuz ye!

Nothin: This comic is gorgeous I love all the whimsical crazy things you do here, and how you really play with it to such a point! I especially love the stairs page, haha that one is so so so good! I love how you play with the readers with such whimsical stuff, however in the end I hafta wonder, what was the point of the story? It seems like there's no real depth in terms of story, however such cool artistic experimentations!Idk if that was intentional but something i wanted to point out either way! Regardless I loved your comic

Mister Kent: I honestly am not entirely sure what to think of this comic, it doesn't feel like a story so much as a random glimpse into an uneventful conversations between a couple. I'm not really much sure what to think. The faces also have a tendency to be drawn a bit wonky in some of the panels such as 2-5. Regardless, good job on the comic and ye!

yarnwitch
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# 6   Posted: Sep 21 2018, 05:46 PM
This turned out really well.
Nothin! You really shine with these sorts of comics! I love this!
The doors were, i think, the only thing i thought "oh thats not as smoothly drawn" i loved the color pop at the end. Overall im just really happy!

Mr Kent!
I felt like I can't add much more than what arts already said, so i'll just leave it at that. You do such fun and lively character designs, so i was excited to see more!

ArtsandGoodies
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# 5   Posted: Sep 19 2018, 09:53 PM
Nothin, I  really enjoy the abstract and silent comic you did this with this was pretty fun. The only thing I could say is that the head of the character should be more consistent color wise. In page one the head has a black border but on pages 2 and 3 it's not there. I think it would have been better if it was more consistent like how in page 5 you have it with a white outline to show the border of the body, also having that outline on page 3 would have been nice to make the body more consistent. Besides that this was a pretty fun abstract comic and I liked how path the character was walking down was constantly changing.

Kent: This is a good page and I like what was going on in it. Rather than wishing for more i would instead have preferred a bit more closure on this. This ended in the middle of the conversation and that makes it feel like another page should be right after. Maybe if the final panel was something like the guy drifting off to sleep that would have had more closure since right now it feels like the page ends at an arbitrary point in the conversation. That being said the dialogue is good and I got a good sense of both of their characters and want to know more about who they are and their relationship.

William_Duel
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# 4   Posted: Sep 16 2018, 07:55 AM
Nothin, I appreciate the ideas behind your comic.  But I feel it could use some more polished execution.  Especially since the comic is so dependent on shapes and patterns as part of it's storytelling.  So I feel there was a real chance to really explore that.  But like the first page is full of shapes that are a bit haphazard.  One look and the linework isn't as polished as it could be.  And while the last page has a mood change indicated by the color, I think it would have been interesting to have the patterns changed to reflect that.  

Mr. Kent, it's a nice page.  Linework needs polishing.  But not much else to say.  

Nothin
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37 comments
# 3   Posted: Sep 15 2018, 10:56 PM
so i guess if anyone is confused we decided on slice of life as a loose theme

yarnwitch
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232 comments
# 2   Posted: Sep 2 2018, 12:57 PM
OMG AN ARTIST MATCH IM SUPER EXCITED

Mister Kent
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939 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 23 2018, 05:14 AM
YASS so excite

Comic Details -

 
Type: Artist Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Sep 21st, 2018
Votes Cast: 14
Page Views: 312
Winner: Nothin

 

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