Ghosts / Talon

Ghosts — Talon

by Badger

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Kozispoon
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1211 comments
# 8   Posted: Jun 20 2018, 11:42 PM
Really REALLY like this coloring style. While simple, I think blocking out your light sources like this really draw the eye and command focus on what needs to be looked at panel to panel. Visually I hope you keep to this. I think you gots something here. :0
As for the story- I'll admit it was fine but was wanting for more finer details. Was Talons loss of magical ability this passively accepted? Just- blam its gone, guess its time to hit the books. If your opponents win was taken at all as canon, Talon went through some STUFF to lose what made him, him. I got into this BB eager to read the aftermath, Talons reaction- an opportunity to really dig into this characters development. As it stands, the story was fine, but I don't think we learned anything new about him.


Reecer6
Artist
365 comments
# 7   Posted: Jun 20 2018, 09:11 PM
grow some zombie trees you geek

ArtsandGoodies
Artist
566 comments
# 6   Posted: Jun 20 2018, 08:38 PM
Your colors and art are amazing in this. Also the action in this is much more clear than in your magic mayhem so good job stepping up the clarity there.

cats
Artist
41 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 20 2018, 07:55 PM
I really like the direction you went with this! I especially enjoyed the colors you used for the backgrounds. Having Talon, the tree, and the beast in one final shot was amazing way to end it.

gosh, I wonder how he's gonna deal with this new development-

PyrasTerran
Artist
1512 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 16 2018, 11:59 AM
While I would have liked to see some prison tales out of Talon this exciting new twist with his new powers is a good consolation prize. I don't have much to say about this comic cause honestly it's just pretty evenly solid all around! Good stuff, make more

yarnwitch
Artist
303 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 16 2018, 04:47 AM
I wonder what else he can affect now!

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 14 2018, 03:54 PM
there is gorgeous art in this! I love his expressions, and all the establishing shots in the backgrounds, the first panel looked fantastic and the colours on that beast slaying panel? amazing! your pacing is getting better too, youre getting a good sense of when to slow down and when to speed up. but im giving you negative a million points anyhow BECAUSE WHY CANT YOU LET HIM BE HAPPY LET TALON BE HAPPY

William_Duel
Community Manager
943 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 14 2018, 03:01 PM
This is great!  I'm glad Magic Mayhem has resulted in an interesting development like this.

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