Fawn's Blind Date / Detroit

Fawn's Blind Date — Detroit

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Kozispoon
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1211 comments
# 7   Posted: May 6 2018, 09:27 PM
I'm almost certain this was on the forums as an art jam submission so I can't be too harsh with critique (as those are for fun), but if there's one thing I notice with your work its that your backgrounds and environments aren't clearly defined. You implement this lineless style which is fine ,but I feel the BG is more of an afterthought than a stylistic choice.

Still though, your content and comics are really delightful and threaten to give us all cavities.

Evi
Artist
110 comments
# 6   Posted: May 2 2018, 10:16 PM
Very cute interactions! I loved Mortimer's reaction to Fawn haha, what luck!

Radji
Artist
623 comments
# 5   Posted: May 2 2018, 05:02 PM
i got duabetes from so much sweetness

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 4   Posted: May 2 2018, 02:52 PM
this is my favorite comic thats ever been posted

Camel
Artist
151 comments
# 3   Posted: May 1 2018, 04:09 PM
Since October your art has improved so much, especially in your characters. They have a lot more fidelity and are less stiff and more naturally posed. And your backgrounds are getting better as well.  I think you have good reason to be proud of this little comic.

Rose
Web Dev
1180 comments
# 2   Posted: May 1 2018, 01:24 PM
Fawn, yet another one of VOID's Ladies with Terrible Taste in Men haha. This whole comic is cute, but that last panel just really sells it for me. I wasn't sure what was going on in the middle of the triptych on the second page, so you might want to watch out for places where there might be a lack of visual clarity (I think she's sitting on her bed? But the whole background is so similar in color and stuff that it's hard to tell exactly what I'm looking at). I really love how you drew Lily and Mortimerr, and that Fawn at the top of page 2 is so good and cute! I'm glad you submitted this as an official comic!

Desichan
Artist
183 comments
# 1   Posted: May 1 2018, 12:51 PM
Posting this as a bb because I was really proud of this comic!!

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