Marie vs. Navy

Marie vs. Navy

by Radji

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Kozispoon
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# 7   Posted: May 6 2018, 10:17 PM
RADJI- Sorry to hear about your comp troubles. Even though this didn't get completed, your pencils give us the shadow of what you intended. Not 100% clear as to what went down, but color me intrigued to see this BB once it comes out.

RITZ- There was a fight- a pretty cool one based on some of the sketches. You got some cool angles and promising panels, but I honestly have no clue whats going down besides a brawl based on what you've shown. :/




Astrodile
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# 6   Posted: May 3 2018, 10:58 AM
Good stuff, good stuff y'all! Props to submitting what you had, even if it was unfinished. Best of wishes to both of you, hope things will turn up eventually for y'all!

Radji: As Yarn said, you definitely have the edge because of the text, but unfortunately I couldn't visually translate what was going on once the transition to Marie & Navy's conversation happens, so even regardless of the writing I couldn't particularly get invested in the plot. Though, others have said that they understood what was going on so...It might just be me haha.

Rittz: Even though there's little clarification as to what's going on, gotta acknowledge that there's some interesting actions/poses that are taking place! I also hope that you do finish this comic, because I'm pretty curious as to what you intended with this comic.

yarnwitch
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# 5   Posted: May 2 2018, 04:39 AM
So while both of you were unfinished, the edge radji has was putting in the text for clarity.
I had trouble following yours, rittz. I think? They're fighting? Randomly? Or marie is fighting someone else? And navy is a bystander? Or something? I liked the comedy flop at the end, especially out of context, for whatever reason it just punched me right in the giggledick.

rittzler
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# 4   Posted: Apr 30 2018, 11:55 AM
Radji I'm in the same boat tbh, don't even sweat it dude.

Things were def a little hectic for me too this month, but not nearly to the same degree. I could've easily gotten something done proper if I tried harder and was more disciplined with myself. Nonetheless, I am hoping to finish mine at a later date as well, so that'll be fun, haha

BOY, what a mess tho

Radji
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# 3   Posted: Apr 30 2018, 04:12 AM
I would like to apologize to Rittz. I'm at my absolute worst here. My wacom AND my PC stopped working, i'm constantly moving since last week.... I'm not defaulting but I will most likely do a finished version and release it as a bb.  Again, sorry Rittz, i wanted to give you my best.

yarnwitch
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# 2   Posted: Apr 23 2018, 05:43 AM
Yay! Good luck everyone! I definitely wanna see more of these two!

Happy December 15th! -Reecer6
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# 1   Posted: Apr 4 2018, 06:51 AM
if this battle had one more 'n' it could be Marine vs. Navy and that would be quite an exciting maritime confrontation.

      Edited Apr 4 2018,  06:53 AM by Happy December 15th! -Reecer6

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