Unknown vs. Click Lyric

Unknown vs. Click Lyric

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Reecer6
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365 comments
# 7   Posted: May 3 2018, 08:09 AM
Fu: This was a neat comic with a lot of nice, intense panels! Love Ruuto's animalism there. I think there are a good few panels where the linework is unclear though, with how dense it all is in the forest, and the last panel of page 3, for example, where there's just a ton of vertical lines. Other than that, it's good work!

Tech: : (

Sabulive
Artist
133 comments
# 6   Posted: May 3 2018, 04:46 AM
FU-DOG:
Inks and anatomy are solid, solidly delicious. I like the story enough, but its a 7 out of 10 for me, mostly due to the use of layout and a few cut corners. Page 7 is the worst offender here; click comes in from the right, but falls down to the left which left me a bit confused. I think you could have also benefited from showing Ruuto's carnage, even if it would have meant drawing half-eaten deer; the silhouette of the dead deer made me think it was bushes and branches. This is more of a nit-pick, but having Ruuto in more animalistic and desperate poses would have also paid off bc for me he looked more like a crazed hobo with jam on his face.

TECHNICOLOUR CHUNDER:
My duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude, it's always a shame when this happens; your style is so expressive and fun to look at. I hope your RL issues get sorted.

JCee
Artist
423 comments
# 5   Posted: May 2 2018, 06:25 AM
Fu - For something done in a rush, it still came out looking solid! I like that you are continuing off from his encounter with Mammon, showing how the entire dreadful experience has affected him as well as seeing what happens when his feral drive overtakes his senses. I also adore your use spot-blacks here, though there were a few areas where it was a little hard to make out. Page 7 being one where I had to look it over and again to figure out the scene. And the ending was abrupt with little resolution, but I still enjoyed it overall. I look forward to seeing more Ruuto comics in the near future!

Tech - Honestly though, it's too incomplete to fully comment on. And I know you said earlier that you couldn't bring yourself to do this comic due to personal stuff popping up, so I'll let it be.

yarnwitch
Artist
303 comments
# 4   Posted: May 2 2018, 04:53 AM
MAN, this is rough for me.
I'm always so excited to see click cause his face is so expressive.
From what I can tell there was a fun chase scene? And... "ruuto take the wheel"? Even if thats not ruuto, that's gonna be a new personal meme for me. "RUUTO TAKE THE WHEEL!!"

Fu, its good, and I don't really know what else to say other than that, sorry.

Technicolor-yawn
Artist
27 comments
# 3   Posted: Apr 30 2018, 09:52 PM
I'm gonna be straight up, I've got pretty much nothing to show cept a couple of outta context pages. alot of its personal stuff that popped suddenly, but I really just didn't have it in me, sorry Fu.

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 2   Posted: Apr 7 2018, 06:42 PM
This was wholly unexpected. =0

Technicolor-yawn
Artist
27 comments
# 1   Posted: Apr 2 2018, 01:28 PM
O HO! I SEE, I SEE!

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