Intro Story / Φη

Intro Story — Φη


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Kozispoon
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# 13   Posted: Mar 19 2018, 10:57 AM
This was a great appetizer by way of inks, gore and character introduction. But now we're ready for more of a main course feast. I'm glad the comments and feedback you've gotten is to punch things up and do more because I feel this comic felt restrained by way of just how creepy and unsettling this character can be. Bring it, bro.

William_Duel
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896 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 17 2018, 10:36 PM
Julz: VIRGIN KILLER SWEATER!!!!!
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It seems like a Virgin was indeed successfully killed so it works.

Julz
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354 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 17 2018, 04:35 PM
VIRGIN KILLER SWEATER!!!!!

Dylerium
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# 10   Posted: Mar 16 2018, 07:18 AM
I think a comment I made got eaten so this is shorter. ): Like I don't know if she goes after bad guys exclusively or if the "good taste" isn't just rhetorical. I like how clearly everything was presented and she has a great personality I think.

Wubble
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# 9   Posted: Mar 16 2018, 01:49 AM
Φη can step on me whenever she wants yes please.

Also solid work all around - all I got is small nit picks, like her feet placement in the last panel makes for an awkward stepping and crossing her legs. I get what you were going for but you missed here.

Heathen
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# 8   Posted: Mar 15 2018, 09:38 PM
Just gonna echo the crotch shadow comment, and add that the bloody bits needed more detail to sell that viscera. Definitely see a marked improvement in your line work and figures here though.

Page one clearly had the most time put into it, but overall a really good looking intro. Can't wait to see who this black widow gets her fangs in first.

      Edited Mar 15 2018,  09:40 PM by Heathen

Rainbow Ichi
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# 7   Posted: Mar 14 2018, 10:31 PM
All I can say is woah o_o this character's unique. She's super picky it seems. Wonder what's her fave.

Bobo
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# 6   Posted: Mar 14 2018, 01:36 PM
I want Φη to stomp my face

yarnwitch
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243 comments
# 5   Posted: Mar 14 2018, 09:20 AM
Please please PLEASE be friends with Sumiko!

Jiisuri
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131 comments
# 4   Posted: Mar 14 2018, 06:46 AM
THAT sweater huh. :V

Also, I love this character already. Good to see you back and well. Your stuff is looking even better now with all the stuff you've been doing since the last time.

GPS-Device
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# 3   Posted: Mar 13 2018, 06:46 PM
PyrasTerran: yaya I really wanna battle this character

but watch out with where/how you etch your shadows; The one you use in the crotch area is accidentally making her look extra bushy

I mean unless that was the intent then alright
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NOT MY INTENTION, haha
Didnt realize that was the effect given off at the time, but after being told, yeah, WHOOPS. I guess i was a little more out of practice than i thought

PyrasTerran
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1394 comments
# 2   Posted: Mar 13 2018, 06:44 PM
yaya I really wanna battle this character

but watch out with where/how you etch your shadows; The one you use in the crotch area is accidentally making her look extra bushy

I mean unless that was the intent then alright

Radji
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492 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 13 2018, 02:43 PM
Instant fav character of the year for me. Wanna fight her with Marie.

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