From shadows we feast / Wictor
Critiques & Comments
# 5
Posted:
Mar 3 2018, 02:12 PM
Ahh! I liked this a lot. A nice hint of Wictor's past. The background looked very nice, if a bit busy. My only complaint was that it was super hard to read the white beast's text. I'm not sure if it was supposed to be taken as a rough voice, but I had to double back a time or two it understand what he was saying. All in all, a very nice read~
# 4
Posted:
Feb 27 2018, 09:39 PM
This was a cool peek into this creatures world and a great comic to get us up to speed on what the heck he even is. I like that Wictor is learning some hard lessons from some fellow devourers, but man do I have questions about the one that was bleeding. What's her deal? why isnt she dead? What the hey??
I personally like that this comic felt like a bit of stroll and not much was revealed. I usually don't, but this was- fo what it was- pretty intriguing. You start off with such a cool opening shot and angle that I'm a bit disappointed that was it. the rest of your comic consist of straight on birch trees which in the end, looked way too busy with the main characters on top. Also, I know you were trying to differentiate the characters from the backgrounds, but I personally like your chunky ink style. It has pizazz, and I'd like to see the world these characters are living in look like they belong. So please, more chunkiness. you can make it work with so much more than your characters.
I personally like that this comic felt like a bit of stroll and not much was revealed. I usually don't, but this was- fo what it was- pretty intriguing. You start off with such a cool opening shot and angle that I'm a bit disappointed that was it. the rest of your comic consist of straight on birch trees which in the end, looked way too busy with the main characters on top. Also, I know you were trying to differentiate the characters from the backgrounds, but I personally like your chunky ink style. It has pizazz, and I'd like to see the world these characters are living in look like they belong. So please, more chunkiness. you can make it work with so much more than your characters.
# 3
Posted:
Feb 27 2018, 08:48 PM
This was a lovely comic, albeit I feel like sometimes it gets a tad messy and hard to understand BUT REGARDLESS THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND WICTOR IS PRECIOUS!!
I wanna see him make a friend so bad now... It's so sad to see this, because he looks so lonely... I just wanna see him getting hugs and stuff. Because he deserves and needs them, he is good boy.
I wanna see him make a friend so bad now... It's so sad to see this, because he looks so lonely... I just wanna see him getting hugs and stuff. Because he deserves and needs them, he is good boy.
# 2
Posted:
Feb 27 2018, 10:21 AM
lookit these cute monsters :3
it's nice to get some positioning on Wictor as a creature,and I'm very intrigued by the relationship of those other two ones, though for the lenght of the thing very little is actually revealed. It does seem slower than necessary to me, and the dialogue is not the most natural, as the other cutie is just saying out everything that needs to come across. I also like the trees though they feel like a bit of a cope-out? haha, the fact that it's just those trees with their obvious trick to them, it's a bit much. I'd have liked a clearing or something, coulda helped frame the meeting more dramatically too. Nice stuff still, though, has me wanting more :0
it's nice to get some positioning on Wictor as a creature,and I'm very intrigued by the relationship of those other two ones, though for the lenght of the thing very little is actually revealed. It does seem slower than necessary to me, and the dialogue is not the most natural, as the other cutie is just saying out everything that needs to come across. I also like the trees though they feel like a bit of a cope-out? haha, the fact that it's just those trees with their obvious trick to them, it's a bit much. I'd have liked a clearing or something, coulda helped frame the meeting more dramatically too. Nice stuff still, though, has me wanting more :0
# 1
Posted:
Jan 29 2018, 06:57 PM
Ooh cant wait!!
Beyond Battle
Drawing Time:
4 weeks
Ended:
Mar 5th, 2018
Votes Cast:
14
Page Views:
1373
Gwen & Regi vs. "Knight Owl" Corry
@ 6:57 AM Mar 18th
The End of Extinction
@ 6:07 AM Mar 18th
Apotheosis
Blake Neddon vs. Lizzie
@ 6:06 AM Mar 18th
99 Problems and a Cat
Croi Desai vs. HR99
@ 10:03 AM Mar 14th
HR99 Winter 2024 Shorts
HR99
@ 12:09 AM Mar 4th
| ||
| ||
| ||
| ||
|
108 Guests, 3 Users
Most Online Today: 113.
Most Online Ever: 1,184 (Jan 13, 2020, 06:21 PM)
Artist