Intro Story / Niles Khairi

Intro Story — Niles Khairi


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Evi
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# 6   Posted: Dec 24 2017, 10:09 PM
I like this character! This was a nice and simple intro, well-paced and you have a lovely sense of colour. My only crit would be that maybe this comic could have benefited from zooming out the camera more, just to get a better sense of the atmosphere and where exactly they are, especially the last page. It works if you were aiming for it to be more vague and open-ended though! Hope to see you battling soon :D

Corn Of The Breads
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# 5   Posted: Dec 23 2017, 06:24 PM
this was some fun art and some intresting story I cant wait to see more of their character on both sides of their identities and how that is balanced. Loved the intro I guess Id just like to see a bit more of how they interact with the world around them and other characters.

Radji
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# 4   Posted: Dec 22 2017, 12:18 PM
intriguing! this character shall be a fine addition to Void

zee
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# 3   Posted: Dec 21 2017, 09:52 PM
From this intro, his bio, and design, I am sufficiently interested in this character!
Congrats on getting in, I'm really looking forward to seeing more from you.

(Also, totally fight me some day please I love monsters)

Hellis
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# 2   Posted: Dec 21 2017, 11:47 AM
Nice, simple, to the point with a exellent hook. Welcome to EnterVoid.

Desichan
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# 1   Posted: Dec 21 2017, 09:19 AM
I feel like that end there is really what gets me interested to see more from this character! Congrats on getting in, and great character, Astro! You rock!!!

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