House of Fragments Part 2: Full Version / Miller

House of Fragments Part 2: Full Version — Miller


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Flutterbyes
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160 comments
# 6   Posted: Nov 26 2017, 07:10 PM
Oh yes, now it's more fleshed out and makes more sense (... kind of). I love Determined Zoey and Battle Zoey, and crying with so many eyes.

Hellis
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206 comments
# 5   Posted: Nov 26 2017, 05:08 PM
Everything here was an aprovement. The colors are more atmospheric, the dialogue more complete, the scenes easier to follow as  a result.

Shen
Global Moderator
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1269 comments
# 4   Posted: Nov 19 2017, 11:04 AM
Yes, good, this is a much better comic. I like the changes you made to the colours so the foreground isnt so far removed from the background, and the additional dialogue helps the clarity a ton. I like how we learned more about who your Miller used to be. He sure gets a lot of forms lol. (I know im in the minority but i still prefer the spider to the lizard form. Fight me, Skulls.) Thanks for cameoing Valley. Great comic!

Desichan
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181 comments
# 3   Posted: Nov 19 2017, 10:47 AM
The added dialogue, and the added depth to the characters you've put into this comic, really make all the difference. I actually enjoyed this comic a lot more now, and you definitely did a good job here. It's a shame you couldn't have done it as much as you would've liked before, but it's really impressive and admirable that you'd go back and work on it harder.

Also that little blurb under Miller's Furry at the end was amazing. XD There's so many Millers, one of these days I'm gonna have to read up on this Miller stuff!

Anyway congrats on getting this more completed!

PyrasTerran
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1406 comments
# 2   Posted: Nov 19 2017, 10:14 AM
I also did what I could with some of the visual look, and added dat depth to the previously flat character models~ hopefully there's a noticeable difference

      Edited Nov 19 2017,  10:14 AM by PyrasTerran

PyrasTerran
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1406 comments
# 1   Posted: Nov 12 2017, 02:00 AM
I failed to get all the text up for my battle before the timer is up.. this is the complete version of the battle, set to go up after voting is done.

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