Margot Seraphina vs. Unknown

Margot Seraphina vs. Unknown

by Sean

This comic has not been rated; viewer discretion advised.

Icon for Margot Seraphina0%
0 points
No images have been uploaded.

Crit level: No preference


by

This comic has not been rated; viewer discretion advised.

100%
382 points
Page 1Page 2Page 3

Crit level: No preference




Critiques & Comments
Please register or log in to comment


JCee
Artist
423 comments
# 8   Posted: Nov 7 2017, 08:16 PM
FU - Don’t have a lot to say, but I dig the colours, I dig the story and the catty dialogue between Samira and Margot. Especially dig the hint of Junji Ito you’re incorporating into your art. Aside from hands and feet anatomy needing a couple tweaks here and there, this was a fun comic! Keep up the good work ~


SEAN - Awww : (  Better luck next time...


Pita (Slowly getting back into it)
Approval Committee
285 comments
# 7   Posted: Nov 2 2017, 05:17 PM
fukur0:
Wolfbaloo: Ahhh so this is the one who killed the beloved chicken adventurer.
Quote

More like it was the other way around haha
Quote
Yeah those were some other dogs

Wolfbaloo
Artist
33 comments
# 6   Posted: Nov 2 2017, 12:38 PM
Ahhh so this is the one who killed the beloved chicken adventurer. Well, it's good to see some more of her character and an understanding of some of her temper problems.

Alouisse Ver
Artist
41 comments
# 5   Posted: Nov 1 2017, 11:34 AM
Fukuro: NICE usage of color palettes. It was really sweet and inspirational watching you work on this. Page 2 is a really stellar page and my favorite of the bunch.

I seriously dig your usage of warm colors to highlight the most intense scenes of the comic. The comic was funny and I seriously dig the banter between Margot and Samira.

Not much to say for me critique wise. I dig the pacing, the humor was there, and I'm interested in both characters and what shenanigans they'll get into next.

Keep ROCKING it!

Pita (Slowly getting back into it)
Approval Committee
285 comments
# 4   Posted: Nov 1 2017, 10:35 AM
omg Margot no

PyrasTerran
Artist
1512 comments
# 3   Posted: Nov 1 2017, 08:27 AM
I really like these colors and how well you've mapped out the environment. I think page 3 could have used a little more blood but I also feel like the force and speed needed to kill a man with a glass bottle to the skull/forehead would also cause said bottle to shatter, maybe i'm just being nitpicky or am simply mistaken on the durability of a bottle

JCee
Artist
423 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 24 2017, 12:06 AM
*EXCITED*

Sean
Artist
382 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 24 2017, 12:03 AM
*Insert ironic song or a light hearted pun*

Comic Details -

 
Regular Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Nov 7th, 2017
Votes Cast: 18
Page Views: 1500
Winner:
 

Add to Playlist -

 
 

Newest Comments -


Newest Characters -

 
TheakonRod ChirpwoodHuskMizz BonzaiSpidella WidowsMyrmidonGhoulArcher Heart MercuryDuncan DealbhaothTarkosDrawura
 

Open Challenges -


Random Comic -


Most Wanted -

 
RantuBlack SwanLilyfeatherKuboCrikey DileNagoreDairyuChickenMannUltraWendigoCharlie RosenbergRickter & GusRocío
 


Latest Topics -

 
All News, All The Time 
Last updated: Staff Bot - Mar 15, 2024, 12:08 AM
Clown Jam 
Last updated: Radji - Feb 11, 2024, 04:51 AM
INTRODUCE YOURSELF 
Last updated: Maz - Nov 06, 2023, 04:13 PM
FAQ: Questions About Void? Post Yours Here! 
Last updated: Darius Corry - Sep 09, 2023, 03:15 PM
Art Diary of an Eternal Student 
Last updated: BoogidiBzdo - Aug 22, 2023, 09:17 PM
 

Latest Members -


Users online -

 
81 Guests, 0 Users


Most Online Today: 121.
Most Online Ever: 1,184 (Jan 13, 2020, 06:21 PM)

 

About Us

We exist to provide an environment for artists to learn and improve their sequential art skills competitively. Our community is designed to give critical feedback and encouragement to our many members the world over, at all skill levels.

Follow Us