Intro Story / Grita The Reaper

Intro Story — Grita The Reaper


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Happy January 20th! -Reecer6
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# 8   Posted: Oct 20 2017, 08:25 AM
I'll have to second what Sean said about this really only needing the first two pages. It honestly struck me hard on the end of page 2 that this was already a pretty good introduction; we got Grita's job and her attitude towards it and her massive boobs, all the highlights. But then there was another page, and then another beyond that. The partying and the yelling just doesn't add much, but I did at least appreciate the callback to her appearance in the OCT. Looking forward to seeing more proper reaping happen in Void!

      Edited Oct 20 2017,  08:26 AM by Happy January 20th! -Reecer6

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# 7   Posted: Oct 19 2017, 09:28 AM
"You died. Congrats bitch!"

I really like Grita the charachter from what we see in this intro. I will have to second Astros comment about that you could easily have halved the comic.

      Edited Oct 20 2017,  08:45 AM by Hellis

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# 6   Posted: Oct 18 2017, 08:52 AM
Awesome new character to add to your roster, dude! I like that you stuck to black and white for her comic. It gives it more sense of dread. I think black and white really sets the tone for the type of character she is. Maybe adding some limited reds here and there in her comics will make it pop a bit more as well? Your font size for your speech bubbles are just a little too big. They sit so close to the boarders of the bubble. It comes off like everyone is screaming the whole time. I think the last two pages could have honestly been dropped. I get that she's a party animal and her Uncle scolding her brings more humor to the character, but I think it would have been solid just showing her doing her job reaping souls and keeping the humor in those first two pages as is.

Stoked to see more, get some battles in!

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# 5   Posted: Oct 17 2017, 12:53 AM
Yeeee! very strong b/w comic! I hope you can do more of hers in this style! :D

The pacing is good and everything clean. A little less 'crammage' would be good next time (leave some resting space for your readers eyes) but overall a strong start of a cool new character.

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# 4   Posted: Oct 16 2017, 07:29 PM
Oh dang. There needs to be a thickest hips battle now. I think there are enough characters for a decent fight over the title. Hope to see her fighting soon!

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# 3   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 11:12 PM
at some point, Grita the Reaper should fight Kreta the Raptor

Corn Of The Breads
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# 2   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 05:09 PM
Its nice to finally see her on void, havent really seen her since the Judgement Call battle. its nice to have a more outspoken reaper character finally out there.

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# 1   Posted: Oct 15 2017, 04:32 PM
Hi there! A new character I see!

Well let me just say a party-loving grim reaper is a pretty interesting idea, just the sexual jokes can get overdone if put in too much. I really would like to see how this character would get along with characters like Gray or Hunter, we'll just have to see. Anyway, welcome Grita to Void City!

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