Mista Jonz vs. james
Critiques & Comments
# 13
Ah, sorry. :-( It\'s just my first reaction. Honestly the character looks really, really original. Usually furry characters end up just being a Sonic or Knuckles v2.0 but Jonz is very different from the norm. I\'ll be more constructive with my critisism from now on. Peace?
# 12
Negative Criticism...kiss my...well, you know
# 11
Mista Jonz... Well I guess I was expecting more. You've got good stuff. But there's not much that stands out. This is my first time seeing a Jonz comic and he looks like a mascot for some kind of cereal. And your story is really dull. Way too much little bits of text that don't help the story along. I skimmed through the really text-heavy parts.
James reigns supreme. I like it when the challenger gets the focus they deserve, rather than just getting beat down by one's own character. I love the watercolour-ish look. You draw what's nessessary and the text is big and is only what's important. Sometimes my eye got distracted. Play with layout a bit more, my eye kinda hit speed bumps between the more action heavy panels.
Besides that, enjoyable stuff.
James reigns supreme. I like it when the challenger gets the focus they deserve, rather than just getting beat down by one's own character. I love the watercolour-ish look. You draw what's nessessary and the text is big and is only what's important. Sometimes my eye got distracted. Play with layout a bit more, my eye kinda hit speed bumps between the more action heavy panels.
Besides that, enjoyable stuff.
# 10
thought the groin kick from James was a bit weak - for it to take down someone so powerful as MJ in a single kick - but i guess its all irrelevant in the name of humor
# 9
Great work guys. You both threw down hard this time around but James\' stuff was just a bit more action packed and moved at a faster pace. So, despite another win by groin kick (is that his super move? haha) I give James the upperhand this time.
# 8
i too enjoyed the transformation. it was like sex
good werk hombre, it was a good rematch
good werk hombre, it was a good rematch
# 7
*fireworks* James 4 president *fireworks* great stuff both of ya....
# 6
^__^ Great work to both of you. Man oh man. having secong thoughts about challenging you two. You\'re just so good, and I am crap. T~T Also looks like James is going to be busy with 3 upcoming fights, and Mista alrady has his gameplan, phew! ^__^ Great work to both of you.
# 5
Haha, that muppet crack was a great XD Mista's transformation is pretty interisting. I'd like to see where you take that in future fights.
Spikes man, I love how you're continuing your "mayor of void city" thing. Got his own thug squad and everything. Like always, pretty funny XD
Spikes man, I love how you're continuing your "mayor of void city" thing. Got his own thug squad and everything. Like always, pretty funny XD
# 4
Mista, I have to say i didn't much care for your panel work. I found it to be too clutered.
James...well, you already know
James...well, you already know
# 3
EXCELLENT work from both of you. Mista\'s a badass, and James.. have you been hanging around Rey? I keep catching hints of Rey in your style and humor.
# 2
Sometimes I wonder if people like my fights because of the dialogue for Mista and his Pimp Squirrel, Nebuchadnazar..i really don\'t know, but WuLong, you make it seem like i dropped out of VOID
# 1
MAN! how long has it been sinse we saw MistaJ fight? this is gonna be sweet.
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Nov 21st, 2003
Votes Cast:
22
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2171
Winner:
James
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