Oh my god this was so cute. As far as gay furry porn goes, this was adorable. Obv some anatomy issues, but pretty good pacing and coloring was okay.

SEXPLAINING

Aside from Miller VS Lesdai and this year's Valentine's Day collab, I don't think I've seen any other smut comics on VOID.  It'll be interesting to see the extent to which you plan to take this with Kao5.

Radji already addressed my first point--the anatomy.  I encourage you to continue studying anatomy and the way a body folds and moves in certain situations.  Given this was between a lust demon and an android, there could be ways their bodies contort that would be impossible for the average human (Kao5's self-fellating panel), so I'm not gonna rag on that.

But I do need to ask this--is the smut intended to be part of Kao5's character building?  If so, I can recommend a few stories to read to get further acquainted with using porn as a means to further plot.  This story here read like a one-time encounter and is kind of...distant?  Varying camera angles can help us get into the intimacy (or lack of intimacy?)  of the moment.

i would recommand using one of those wooden puppet with realistic joints to help you with your more creatives shots and angles. Anatomical knownledge will be most useful for Kao5 and his adventures

This was such a treat when you were working on it, as you showed me how the progress went and all the stuff you had planned. (I still feel bad for not being able to do my side. But that's a story for another time)

I love how daring you were with all the angles. I am aware you didn't use reference for all the poses, but even the ones you did on your own look very pleasant. Same for the body language. Like I said, if you had gone for a Silent Comic, we would still be able to understand the story well.
Your expressions have improved greatly since your last two comics, and it is nice to see this more erotic side of Kao5.

Even if you didn't finish as much as you expected, with the light effects and such, be aware you had a little less than a month to work on this. Don't be so hard on yourself, okay?

Once again thank you for featuring my character. I enjoyed this comic a lot.

Thanks Heathen!

I'm glad you noticed the slat-blinds. I think you can tell that the lighting was my next step. I just flamed out getting the rest done. That said, I experimented a TON on this, and my next cycle will probably be experiments in color.

Thanks Flutter!

I undercut myself in the editing, I think, and ended up cutting too much of the Why. I'll try to be more on top of that next time around.

Ooh, this is what you've been working on!  I knew there'd be sexytimes going in, and there is quite a lot of it going on.

I like the concept of these two connecting over what they do and don't have in common in a way others might not, though I found myself a little confused by the conversation between the second and third pages. I kept feeling like there there was a speech bubble I'd missed somewhere as the conversation shifted. I suppose you didn't need to because of Lesdai's history on Void, but I feel like the comic would have benefited from establishing a bit more motivation for him trying to make the moves on him from the start, or the needs he has that Kao5 would address at the close of the comic.

I think the next step in your artistic progress should be experimenting with your use of color. When 90% of your comic is a passionate sex scene, and the other 10% is in a strip club, 110% of that comic needs to be evocative mood lighting. That club should be drenched in darkness and all the characters bathed in red. That hotel room should be "stage dark", in other words, implied to be very dark, but where we, the viewers, can clearly see what's going on. So maybe cast it in deep purples and blues, but have an indirect light source, like a lamp on the dresser with a red shade, or a neon sign outside the window, throwing red light through the slats of the blinds.

This serves a few purposes. You get to play around with interesting shapes, in the case of the slatted shadows thrown by the blinds. Limiting what the viewer can see, and being selective with what details you show, much like some good lingerie, works to up the sexiness of the scene, and makes the reader want to see more, and imagine the bits that are concealed in the dark. It makes their imaginations run wild. Also, using monochromatic or limited color palettes is a technically easier way to color, and is more effective than flats alone. Win-win. And finally, you achieve a sexier looking comic while drawing less! You can't beat that.

On a non-color-related note, your dialogue balloons are really confusing, because they're so far apart, and you've got half the conversation on the far left side of the panel, and the other half on the right, and you have to look back and forth, and sometimes the writing itself feels disjointed, exacerbating things. Additionally, some clearer indication of who the two speakers were on page one would have been welcome. That page could have been better conceived all around.

Young hearts be free tonight

Due to some complications the last battle didn't work out, but... Kao5 will have his fun! (With special guest Lesdai)

And in this episode of "elge is a dick"