I too felt a little lost on the story here at first, but I think I was able to glean enough to tell that Louise has some wicked dangerous stuff planned for the future. I also enjoyed Louise and Kars' dialogue regardless.
I hope to learn more from your next comics!
Kars vs. Louise Ambre-Aliona
Critiques & Comments
# 5
Posted:
Aug 5 2017, 04:53 PM
# 4
Posted:
Aug 1 2017, 12:39 PM
Radji: I thought the story of Kars' dead spider daughter was rather touching and a fun way to connect him to Louise's story. I think we could have used a little more detail about the other Arakhs and the threat Louise is trying to fight. I understood it because you've told me a little more about Louise's backstory, but if I didn't have that context I think I would have gotten lost in some of the more vague exposition here. Also, I just have to say that Louise's outfit is SUPER CUTE!! ^_^
# 3
Posted:
Jul 31 2017, 09:12 AM
I forgive TDK. I will only send Brown recluses after you, i promise ^^
nah, seriously, it happens, i hope we'll still get to see your side, like, if you ever post it as a Beyond Battle?
nah, seriously, it happens, i hope we'll still get to see your side, like, if you ever post it as a Beyond Battle?
# 2
Posted:
Jul 4 2017, 03:20 PM
KARS IS BACK
# 1
Posted:
Jul 3 2017, 12:02 PM
oh i look forward to this!!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
3 weeks + 1
Ended:
Aug 5th, 2017
Votes Cast:
13
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1578
Winner:
Radji
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Colbitzer
@ 3:32 PM Apr 17th
Birthright
Saal, Louise Ambre-Aliona, and Llaana
@ 3:44 PM Apr 16th
Help Needed
Theakon
@ 2:19 PM Apr 16th
The Great Switcheroo
Louise Ambre-Aliona vs. Luniel Gekka
@ 3:26 AM Apr 15th
The Great Switcheroo
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@Fukur0: Damn check the smoke detector cuz I think you roasted me !! (yes I'm proud of my joke, don't judge me) I do agree that the quality was lower than my last Louise comic. I usually try to experiment a maximum of new textures, brush, and techniques in my Comics, but sometimes it's... a lil too much. Also, that wasn't Kars in the painting, but Louise.
@Zee Indeed. Wicked plans. I need to unravel them soon.
Thank you three for your comments, may the spider-god thread in your favor.