Thanks for the feedbacks. I did worry about Jefferson's ability to be remembered on the spot,but I wanted to keep everything tight. For me, and I understand this is not self-evident especially due to the timeline on which they were created, bit to me all the comics so far for the wives are kind of an extended intro, with this one marking the end of that arch, or the starting point for the actual stuff, either way. there are certainly some issues, but I did what I wanted to do and it came out like I wanted, even if my wants were imperfect that makes me happy haha. I'm glad everyone liked the colours, the look was mostly designed to test out some techniques and finesse some issues for a project I'm working on. (The colours are too bright for that and that's a good thing to know for myself too) anyway I'm done rambling thank you.

TDK-
For how short and unfinished this was I was still amused by the sandwich shenanigans ha ha.
Also, hope you had a good time on your trip!

Fred-
I agree with Shen, that animation is pretty creative and yet it seems so spot on! Also maybe a strange comment, but that last page, the timing just feels so right on those panels, good stuff. And of course like others have said your colors are a pleasure to look at.
Please give us more Good Wife Bad Wife soon.

teeds: bro.
Fred: the animation is like the best visual interpretation of trying to recall what somebody looks like that ive seen lol. These colours are GORGEOUS and I love how you draw elle. The story I had to read twice to understand properly but I suppose thats my failing. Like Kozi, I forgot who Jefferson was as well at first lol. I hope in future comics I get to see more interaction between the wives

TDK- You had something starting here, but as you said life got in the way, so I really don't know what to think of this XD


LEFRED- I always love your colors. You always go for such unconventional looks for your comic battles that when I see you on the comics being drawn page I get really excited. Funnily enough you had such a dynamic look for what was otherwise a pretty chill story. Dare I say, a pretty mundane story. For me, I only found myself leaning into my chair when Good wife  gives her dearly beloved a knuckle sandwich, but then the comics over.
I had to go back and remember who the heck Jefferson was. Granted, this name drop is always good incentive to have readers go back to your previous comics to see whats what, but I kinda wish there was a guilty flashback, or brief reminder to not only get up to speed within this battle, or if nothing else see the weight of what Bad Wife had to deliver to her good wife by way of bad news. As it stands, its just...told. Maybe Bad wife is just that callous, but I would've liked to have seen some sorta inner conflict out of affection for her wife. Though now I'm curious what your next battle will do to further this plot line.

@TDK : "and she went to jail" how many times does that make?

@Fred: "Jefferson is dead"....SMOOTH.

"I started watching without you."

Ah yes, that one scene where it's a still frame for a good 90 seconds.

I like that they're watching Evangelion

Full disclosure: I only actually spent like 3 days on this and uploading early because I have a road trip in an hour.

ahh! this will be a good one! cant wait to see!