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Intro Story — Virtua


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MrPr1993
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# 4   Posted: Oct 10 2016, 11:20 AM
Indeed. She used to be, well, smaller, but now she's wider and taller

Corn Of The Breads
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# 3   Posted: Oct 8 2016, 04:57 AM
It is intresting seeing her in her OG attire, good to see she is no longer a mindless puppet stuck between dimensions Bound to defend a cruel goo jar in a hat for all eternity, constantly falling apart and being sown back together, unless this is in the past OoooOOOooooOo~ no but as always you got your own tastes but did a good job with her being a character first and it will be intresting once you start fighting people.

MrPr1993
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# 2   Posted: Oct 7 2016, 02:56 PM
Fascinating... I really gotta make the background characters... more defined rather than makin' em look more generic. And I gotta work on the shading more.

Thanks for the crritique!

Elyan
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# 1   Posted: Oct 6 2016, 05:13 AM
i really enjoy this. had seen virtua in the discord here and there and was quiet unsure how she might work out. i thinik you did a great job overall.... full colour entry with a nice funny little plot.
i just hope you get your actual drawings a little better refined characterwise. virtua is most solid but when it comes to actual normal characters i feel like you loose your routine.
also even if this works fine i think there is a lot of potential for improvement. wonder how you develope your style over the time.

hope to see more stuff from you

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