SlimeGirls never die... / Smiley the Slime Goo Thingy

SlimeGirls never die... — Smiley the Slime Goo Thingy

by Radji

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petarvee
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# 3   Posted: Sep 16 2016, 12:27 PM
Definitely diggin the improvement, man! It's refreshing to see what you can pump out without a time limit. Your figures are definitely tighten and your actions a lot more dynamic. Plus the detail on the pipes and tunnel give it that nice, gritty, sewer feeling. And writing-wise, it's a fun little body-horror romp that ends on a nice cute note.

I'd say the biggest crit I've got is with your shading. Using black as a shadow color tends to flatten things out a bit, or give it a very sorta generic light-source. It's a sewer! Maybe light reflecting off the sewer water gives the whole place a dim blue glow; then just use the opposite color to shade! Blue light? Warm shadows. Yellow light? Cool shadows. It might seem a bit backwards, but it really helps flesh out the world a bit and make it pop.

And I'm a big fan of your venture into cool, gorey, panels, but they definitely work better with a slow build. Like, having the flesh and muscle slowly peel away like paint, or bubble off into a puddle like an egg. That's the stuff. Otherwise it's over too quick before the audience has time to register the "Oh Sweet Jesus No" factor. And maybe consult those old-timey anatomical drawings for their super-tight-detail in the muscles. The real-er it feels, the better.

But overall, a totally marked improvement from your previous stuff, and I'm always down to see more!

Sean
Artist
382 comments
# 2   Posted: Sep 12 2016, 08:25 AM
SLIME TIME

Ish
Artist
79 comments
# 1   Posted: Sep 12 2016, 07:10 AM
Ohoho! Damn creepy! But Smiley is so adorable! Your lineart and panels get better and better each comic, as well as your shading and coloring! Page 3 was my favorite, great use of perspective and camera angles!  XD

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