Intro Story / Teo

Intro Story — Teo

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Heathen
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# 5   Posted: Oct 11 2016, 07:17 PM
I really like your writing, minimal as this example is, just really watch those typos.

Kozispoon
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1211 comments
# 4   Posted: Sep 4 2016, 02:34 PM
As someone who saw both your initial pass and revised intro pages, I gotta say this is heads and shoulders such an impressive comeback. It leaves me surprised you didn't just come at us with this caliber of quality from the get-go. I would echo some of the previous feedback you've gotten to give as much love to your environments/backgrounds as you do the characters. You'd be surprised the difference a comic page makes when a knight is sitting in a room that reflects his character as opposed to four blank walls.
Definitely wish you luck and look forward to seeing who you choose to get your battle on!

The Bent One
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564 comments
# 3   Posted: Sep 1 2016, 05:01 PM
I'd love to see some more lines in the art, but this is pretty strong to start off. I think some of the panels aren't working (lower left corner of page 1 with the triangular split of picking the can off the shelf and plopping it out onto the plate). I love the melancholy tone you captured here. Let's see some more!

JCee
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424 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 31 2016, 05:50 PM
Yay he's in! Can't wait to see him in action!

Dumorte
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76 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 31 2016, 05:48 PM
holy balls i love this!!!

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