As someone who saw both your initial pass and revised intro pages, I gotta say this is heads and shoulders such an impressive comeback. It leaves me surprised you didn't just come at us with this caliber of quality from the get-go. I would echo some of the previous feedback you've gotten to give as much love to your environments/backgrounds as you do the characters. You'd be surprised the difference a comic page makes when a knight is sitting in a room that reflects his character as opposed to four blank walls.
Definitely wish you luck and look forward to seeing who you choose to get your battle on!
Intro Story / Teo
Critiques & Comments
# 4
Posted:
Sep 4 2016, 02:34 PM
# 3
Posted:
Sep 1 2016, 05:01 PM
I'd love to see some more lines in the art, but this is pretty strong to start off. I think some of the panels aren't working (lower left corner of page 1 with the triangular split of picking the can off the shelf and plopping it out onto the plate). I love the melancholy tone you captured here. Let's see some more!
# 2
Posted:
Aug 31 2016, 05:50 PM
Yay he's in! Can't wait to see him in action!
# 1
Posted:
Aug 31 2016, 05:48 PM
holy balls i love this!!!
Beyond Battle
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