Barrows vs. Sugar Rush

Barrows vs. Sugar Rush

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by Rursus

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petarvee
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83 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 30 2016, 03:28 AM
@MaxieWest Cute as hell! The only things I could really critique are color choice and background. For night scenes, try a blue or purple instead of black. It'll make the scene a lot more readable and force you to work in a limited palette. Otherwise its a bit of a strain to see black inks under black gradients and dark colors. And for your backgrounds, try dropping little details in there. Mark-making on the wall, some lamps, some posters or decoration. It'll help the world feel a bit more real.

@Rursus Really diggin the open pages! It gives a lotta breathing room and space for your eyes to move. Watch "The 180 Rule" though. Sometimes characters are just suddenly facing a different direction or theyve swapped sides and it takes a second or two to figure out who everyone is. And while that's not really bad, it just sorta takes you outta the comic for a sec and all the good lead-in and pacing grinds to a halt.

The Man Who Planted Swag
Artist
26 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 29 2016, 12:58 PM
@MaxieWest  ahhhh poor Barrows, i wanna give him a hug. Nice coloring, and good job changing the colors of the characters for outside and inside. I would say to be a little more aware of your light sources. You have some shading that looks nice, but it is mostly used for giving the characters a bit of shading (if that makes sense) it dosen't really flow with the backgrounds lighting.

@Rursus I like that you make really dynamic paneling but sometimes i feel like it gets a bit crazy and hard to read. It feels really actiony but in places that no action is taking place in. It kinda takes away from when you use the paneling to add to barrows transformation. I really like Sugar rush's transformation panel. Its a good quick way to show that he changed.

all in all good job you guys! I really loved these two comics

MaxieWest
Artist
34 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 27 2016, 06:54 AM
Aw man Rursus I really love this! Spencer's chirps throughout the comic were great. And your paneling was just amazing! It's defiantly one of my favorite things about your style. It was a little weird seeing Barrows talking but I really like how you've drawn him, especially in his banshee form.

Also I nearly died at "aaaand you left the panel"

Fearn
Artist
366 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 23 2016, 05:00 AM
whooo! go go go guys!!

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