@MaxieWest ahhhh poor Barrows, i wanna give him a hug. Nice coloring, and good job changing the colors of the characters for outside and inside. I would say to be a little more aware of your light sources. You have some shading that looks nice, but it is mostly used for giving the characters a bit of shading (if that makes sense) it dosen't really flow with the backgrounds lighting.
@Rursus I like that you make really dynamic paneling but sometimes i feel like it gets a bit crazy and hard to read. It feels really actiony but in places that no action is taking place in. It kinda takes away from when you use the paneling to add to barrows transformation. I really like Sugar rush's transformation panel. Its a good quick way to show that he changed.
all in all good job you guys! I really loved these two comics
Barrows vs. Sugar Rush
Critiques & Comments
# 3
Posted:
Jul 29 2016, 12:58 PM
# 2
Posted:
Jul 27 2016, 06:54 AM
Aw man Rursus I really love this! Spencer's chirps throughout the comic were great. And your paneling was just amazing! It's defiantly one of my favorite things about your style. It was a little weird seeing Barrows talking but I really like how you've drawn him, especially in his banshee form.
Also I nearly died at "aaaand you left the panel"
Also I nearly died at "aaaand you left the panel"
# 1
Posted:
Jul 23 2016, 05:00 AM
whooo! go go go guys!!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks
Ended:
Aug 2nd, 2016
Votes Cast:
23
Page Views:
1581
Winner:
Rursus
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@Rursus Really diggin the open pages! It gives a lotta breathing room and space for your eyes to move. Watch "The 180 Rule" though. Sometimes characters are just suddenly facing a different direction or theyve swapped sides and it takes a second or two to figure out who everyone is. And while that's not really bad, it just sorta takes you outta the comic for a sec and all the good lead-in and pacing grinds to a halt.