2016 Invitational: Round 2 / Colorado vs. Cherry B0MB

2016 Invitational: Round 2 — Colorado vs. Cherry B0MB

by Dumorte

52.2%
601 points
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by Audius

47.8%
550 points
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Flutterbyes
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# 12   Posted: Jul 18 2016, 09:54 AM
Dumorte: Yeah, I think you're pulling off what you've been going for a lot better now. I'm totally digging your stories. It's more slick and deliberate this round. If you can make your white areas on black shapes/backgrounds stronger, you'll really rock that look. Since you're going for bold chiaroscuro, you really gotta experiment with line weight. You don't necessarily need a fancy pen or brush to do it.

Audius, that's some pretty cool stuff going on, down to your use of color! It's more of a vignette than a story, but it's an exiting one. I think some of the big and close up panels are a liiittle too close to the action and they come up looking crowded.

Dumorte
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# 11   Posted: Jul 14 2016, 06:26 AM
@Pyras Good call on the text size. I wasn't sure if I SHOULD do that in order to keep it all consistent throughout the comic. I did play with the font sizes in page 2 but that was just to give the implication of the constant questioning happening as they left the room in a hurry. Definitely will do so next time around though! Thank you!

@Inks I'm glad you liked my contrasting moody blacks with the humor! It's totally what I was aiming for! Haha. I do definitely need to work on anatomy and I really am trying. Most if not all of my wrestling drawings I use references for so, I just need to keep on practicing!

@Audius I feel yah. This was the best I could do with a week as well. A week with a full time office job where the last thing I want to do when I get home is sit down in front of a computer. lol. I'm really glad you liked the comic and my interpretation of CB! I was really worried that you weren't going to like her :/ Drawing women is super hard for me lol. And like I said before, i loooooooved yours. I keep reading it!

      Edited Jul 14 2016,  06:26 AM by Dumorte

Audius
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# 10   Posted: Jul 13 2016, 04:45 PM
Dumorte: OMG Audius that is amaaazzziiiinnnggg!! LOL. I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!
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Thanks @Dumorte!  I tried my best with my schedule and some other issues, but I'll keep my excuses to myself.  Your comic is amazing, I love how Cherry B0MB looks in your style, you did great!

Inksword
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# 9   Posted: Jul 13 2016, 03:43 PM
Dumorte: You have funny stuff going on in the dialogue, and you seem to really be pushing your spot blacks which makes your comics moody in a way that contrasts the humor and makes it that much funiner. I'd like to see you work on your figure drawing and anatomy though, it could really bring the whole wrestling theme way up!

Audius: Obviously you made a short comic to fit your lack of time, but I think you could've edited it better. If you cut the first page without losing much or condensed it into a panel explaining they were tag-teaming. Then if you started with the second page, you could've had a whole page to do a cool action scene with Colorodo and Cherry BOMB that would've elevated the awesomeness you were trying to get at with your last page!

PyrasTerran
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1406 comments
# 8   Posted: Jul 13 2016, 01:37 PM
Dumorte: There's alot of talking here but it's really funny and entertaining for the most part, particularly the first half. But what you should do next time is shrink the size of your text, that will make them fill your screen less and you'll need fewer bubbles to say it all (like the second to last panel has too many bubbles, it shouldn't have more than 2 at that)

Audius: Interesting situation, it is evident that you ran out of time to make a full story and comic so it's commendable that you managed to squeeze this out. It's a bit too brief obviously, but hopefully you can come back swinging with your next comic

Dumorte
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# 7   Posted: Jul 13 2016, 08:42 AM
OMG Audius that is amaaazzziiiinnnggg!! LOL. I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!

Audius
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# 6   Posted: Jul 12 2016, 10:58 PM
WELL, very lively week but I submitted something!

Wish you the best hermano!

Dumorte
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76 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 12 2016, 08:02 PM
njwvnkuswnlv;!

submitted

lol good luck CB!

Q-Bit
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# 4   Posted: Jul 10 2016, 02:15 PM
Ayyy, suplex this guy one for me, kay? (Good luck to both of ya.)

Dumorte
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76 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 5 2016, 06:55 PM
Buena Suerte!

Audius
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7 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 5 2016, 06:52 PM
El Colorado vs La Bomba Empleado?  Buena suerte!

Shen
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1269 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 5 2016, 05:51 PM
Cherry Bomb more like POWER BOMB
GOOD LUCK YOU GUYS!

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Jul 19th, 2016
Votes Cast: 34
Page Views: 569
Winner: Dumorte
 

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