Raygun vs. Paavo
Critiques & Comments
# 6
Posted:
Jul 17 2016, 10:09 AM
Damn kent that was really entertaining XD I was really getting into it!!
# 5
Posted:
Jul 12 2016, 03:24 PM
Kent: Honestly theres not much to say about this. Your presentation is as good as usual with some nice lineart and paneling. I've noticed you draw Wizzie in a different outfit each time she appears in your comics, I don't have anything to say about that I just think it's a nice little detail. Story wise I can only say that I wish you could have prolonged the fight with Ray and Lawson a little to make it a bit more entertaining, other than that it's well enough on it's own. Also It's cool to see the Danger Rangers slowly growing in numbers so I'm interested to see if that goes anywhere for them.
Elge: I feel your pacing is what you really need to improve on, I've noticed you tend to jump into things without properly building up to them. For instance when Miller reveal's Lawson's identity and Raygun immediately attacks him it feels like a good chunk of that scene is left out. Don't you think with a reveal like that we should have also gotten a reaction from the other rangers and Lawson himself or actually see Raygun pull out his gun before he shot it? Don't present situations like these without drawing out the sequence of actions that leads up to them, otherwise it'll just break up the flow of the story. Other than that I'd say try to experiment angel shots to make them more varied and to keep things visually interesting.
Elge: I feel your pacing is what you really need to improve on, I've noticed you tend to jump into things without properly building up to them. For instance when Miller reveal's Lawson's identity and Raygun immediately attacks him it feels like a good chunk of that scene is left out. Don't you think with a reveal like that we should have also gotten a reaction from the other rangers and Lawson himself or actually see Raygun pull out his gun before he shot it? Don't present situations like these without drawing out the sequence of actions that leads up to them, otherwise it'll just break up the flow of the story. Other than that I'd say try to experiment angel shots to make them more varied and to keep things visually interesting.
# 4
Posted:
Jul 12 2016, 08:39 AM
MrKent: hahaha You're BOTH roasted !!
Elge: MAN ray is a dick here
Elge: MAN ray is a dick here
# 3
Posted:
Jun 20 2016, 08:19 PM
YOOOOO Im for this!!
# 2
Posted:
Jun 20 2016, 07:56 PM
MISTER KENT and his All-Star Funkadelic Jambox: Moar werewoofs and werewoof huntin'
Moar hairy shirtless battles
This is my vow
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You know what. Yes
# 1
Posted:
Jun 20 2016, 07:27 PM
Moar werewoofs and werewoof huntin'
Moar hairy shirtless battles
This is my vow
Moar hairy shirtless battles
This is my vow
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks + 1
Ended:
Jul 18th, 2016
Votes Cast:
27
Page Views:
1670
Winner:
Mister Kent
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Elge: congrats on being able to complete you're story dude! Very much enjoyed.