Raygun vs. Paavo

Raygun vs. Paavo

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by Dechado

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MyHatsEatPeople
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408 comments
# 7   Posted: Jul 17 2016, 11:43 AM
Kent: Raygun you're a racist and technically to yourself too. But I died at the "I'm sure" panel with his cute angry eyebrows

Elge: congrats on being able to complete you're story dude! Very much enjoyed.

Julz
Artist
411 comments
# 6   Posted: Jul 17 2016, 10:09 AM
Damn kent that was really entertaining XD I was really getting into it!!

ZigZagaroo
16 comments
# 5   Posted: Jul 12 2016, 03:24 PM
Kent: Honestly theres not much to say about this. Your presentation is as good as usual with some nice lineart and paneling. I've noticed you draw Wizzie in a different outfit each time she appears in your comics, I don't have anything to say about that I just think it's a nice little detail. Story wise I can only say that I wish you could have prolonged the fight with Ray and Lawson a little to make it a bit more entertaining, other than that it's well enough on it's own. Also It's cool to see the Danger Rangers slowly growing in numbers so I'm interested to see if that goes anywhere for them.

Elge: I feel your pacing is what you really need to improve on, I've noticed you tend to jump into things without properly building up to them. For instance when Miller reveal's Lawson's identity and Raygun immediately attacks him it feels like a good chunk of that scene is left out. Don't you think with a reveal like that we should have also gotten a reaction from the other rangers and Lawson himself or actually see Raygun pull out his gun before he shot it? Don't present situations like these without drawing out the sequence of actions that leads up to them, otherwise it'll just break up the flow of the story. Other than that I'd say try to experiment angel shots to make them more varied and to keep things visually interesting.

Radji
Artist
623 comments
# 4   Posted: Jul 12 2016, 08:39 AM
MrKent: hahaha  You're BOTH roasted !!

Elge: MAN ray is a dick here

Animeshen
Artist
1490 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 20 2016, 08:19 PM
YOOOOO Im for this!!

Dechado
Artist
255 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 20 2016, 07:56 PM
MISTER KENT and his All-Star Funkadelic Jambox: Moar werewoofs and werewoof huntin'
Moar hairy shirtless battles
This is my vow
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You know what. Yes

Mister Kent
Artist
958 comments
# 1   Posted: Jun 20 2016, 07:27 PM
Moar werewoofs and werewoof huntin'
Moar hairy shirtless battles
This is my vow

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