camel: its been a while since you made klepp's intro, so how dare you remind me how amazing you are. your focus on background details is SOOOOO GOOD end me.

the story isn't AS complete as it COULD be, but that's nitpicking. I'd say to maybe add more plot elements next time, but I'm so glad to see dat boi once more.

swordfactory: THESE THINGS HAPPEN just keep it in mind for next time!

i like this story, and Klepp's gimmick of useless but still awesome artifact will never get old
careful witth 'hairy' lines, tho. otherwise sometimes, it's difficult to appreciate some scenes

yeah your deadline was the night before~ make sure you're on top of the timer for your next battle

FUCK! I was actually going to post something today, but I was busy all day and I guess I missed the deadline. It wasn't complete, but I really wanted to post it anyway

This was a nice little concise story! The background on the first page is absolutely lovely! I feel like you could have bumped up the backgrounds just a teensy bit (like on the last panel on the last page) because you obviously have an eye for detail. Also, dem hands. They are waaaaaaay too tiny. Other than that, you have an interesting style, and I look forward to seeing you do some more fights!

really had a fun time doing this comic, even if i had to re-do my last page (that's why it seems a bit slap-dash). and swordfactory, i've got no hard feelings about the default, life happens.

what a bummer theswordfactory... hope you give us what you had in a beyondbattle or something
haunted widget: klepp is a charming character. really i liked all that... you could have used some more black usage especially on the characters for some depth but within that deadline i´m glad to see a proper plot

HauntedWidget: I really really really dig that style, yo! Altho I think the last page felt a little empty due the lack of black, it was still a really fun read! You are really good drawing faces too! The story was really fun too and the characters were pretty well written! And I really like Klepp XD

TheSwordFactory: Awww, too bad you didn't make it in time! I hope you are feeling alright, and best of the lucks in the next battle!

HauntedWidget: How wonderful a comic this is, you've got draws, you've got a sweet story, you've got backgrounds! I think you understand your fundamentals just fine so just keep drawing and you're just gonna get better and better. I'd avoid getting too varied with the font (like the white on black and the bubble-less in page 3) cause it feels like the comic is being translated from another language, basically like second-pass vs professional

TheSwordFactory: Damn, defaults suck, but they suck more when it's with a long deadline. Hopefully you're still in good health and all that

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