Enbu 01: Mize track Side B / Mize
Critiques & Comments
Tommy
5 comments
# 13
Posted:
Apr 19 2007, 02:10 PM
Dude... its a sketch and I luv it >.<! Were work is really inspiring. ^ ^
# 12
Posted:
May 29 2006, 05:33 AM
in japan that is
# 11
Posted:
May 29 2006, 05:33 AM
o ys i found out what onee\'san means! oneesan means (big sister) and oni san means (big brother)
# 10
Posted:
Apr 15 2006, 12:28 PM
*talking really fast* peanut butter jelly, peanut butter jelly, peanut butter jelly with a baseball bat!
# 9
Posted:
Apr 11 2006, 01:02 PM
hahahahahaha. jelly jelly jelly you bastard. You make me lol.
# 8
Posted:
Apr 10 2006, 03:30 PM
Amazing! 0.0 Once I get a character here I\'d love to battle you. ^^
# 7
Posted:
Apr 10 2006, 10:58 AM
I like the story btw! the art feels unfinished, but eh, the story is nice
# 6
Posted:
Apr 10 2006, 03:22 AM
Your lines are awesome. So very awesome. Alot of your panels are a bit flat, they don\'t have a sense of depth like your characters do. Page 7 is an exception to this, there\'s plenty of space there! Overall very nice. And nice pacing BTW.
# 5
Posted:
Apr 9 2006, 10:11 PM
oh my...
amazing work, really
amazing work, really
# 4
Posted:
Apr 9 2006, 09:01 PM
My ashito battle will come soon, it would be in color if that makes you long for color. As for that, I think if I manage to please everyone with my coloring skills, then I have to start learning to rely on my black and white. Isnt that what Void is? to learn, not just to show off what you can do.
If I have to battle people that are good, I have to learn, and master every aspect in order to be successful. So if your disappointed the color is gone, dont worry, maybe someday..SOMEDAY when my linework is good and can rely on its own, then I can do color again. for now, I cannot rely on something that is just an excuse for poor linework.
If I have to battle people that are good, I have to learn, and master every aspect in order to be successful. So if your disappointed the color is gone, dont worry, maybe someday..SOMEDAY when my linework is good and can rely on its own, then I can do color again. for now, I cannot rely on something that is just an excuse for poor linework.
# 3
Posted:
Apr 9 2006, 08:44 PM
im wiht felle quality wise coz in the last battles you did you can see that the quality slipped, this is understandable man you wereo n a tight deadline but DAMMIT! I fucking LOVE your black and white work. Your moo fight was really good and showed that you can draw verywell without having to polish over stuff with colours, i was most impressed
uhh so yeah. THIS bb is good. I like how youre always wiht the continuity man
uhh so yeah. THIS bb is good. I like how youre always wiht the continuity man
# 2
Posted:
Apr 9 2006, 08:34 PM
With the sheer volume of work you\'ve been putting out recently, I\'m not surprised that you aren\'t spending as much time on the pages as you have in the past. Maybe you should slow it down some, because I would really like to see some work that you put al your effort into, not just quick, less-than-a-week battles. Idon\'t know what happened to your Ashito fight, but I\'m hoping that your Danielle fight will be the full-color, go-for-broke quality that I know you\'re capable of.
# 1
Posted:
Apr 9 2006, 05:45 PM
Man, I love your stuff. Great as usual.
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