Intro Story / Clementine Grudgett

Intro Story — Clementine Grudgett

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The Bent One
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564 comments
# 7   Posted: Apr 20 2016, 04:26 PM
I long to see more variation in the line weights. Also more blacks. Overall, the action flows well, and it's pretty clear what is happening and when. Always double-check your image size when working with digital, these pages should be between 800px and 900px wide, at 72dpi (web standard).

I like the idea of the character, she seems like she is a great fit for the City, and her character quirks are bound to manifest if some fun ways in future battles.

Heathen
Artist
462 comments
# 6   Posted: Apr 20 2016, 03:37 PM
This comic needed either heavier blacks and more shading, or color, as it all looks a little too white for my taste.  Your art is very readable, though, and your camera is appropriately dynamic.  I could've used a little more dialogue from Clementine as to her relationship with the serpent, I take it she's some sort of monster hunter?  I look forward to learning more about what led to her waking up in the Void City outskirts, and her interesting weapon.

TheSwordFactory
Artist
7 comments
# 5   Posted: Apr 20 2016, 12:16 PM
Lmao, the original pages were twice as big (around 4k?), these are the sized down ones

I'll have to make the res lower next time.

I am much excite to fight, but I worry about deadlines. I can only hope that I'll find the motivation to get comics done quickly enough.

MyHatsEatPeople
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408 comments
# 4   Posted: Apr 20 2016, 01:32 AM
I have a mighty need to fight her

Radji
Artist
623 comments
# 3   Posted: Apr 20 2016, 12:57 AM
she is there ! FINALYYYYYYY !!!
the pages are a bit big buuuuut doesn't really bother me. just adjust the size of your future comics !

JCee
Artist
424 comments
# 2   Posted: Apr 19 2016, 05:44 PM
Hooray you got in!

Pages are too big for my liking, but nevertheless I cannot wait to see you in action.

merlinsbeard
Artist
17 comments
# 1   Posted: Apr 19 2016, 05:31 PM
That was freaking awesome! I love your drawing style, and your story is good too! Your character looks great and she enters void with a bang! I look forward to battling you soon!

Your comic is a little large though, I did the same thing with my first intro comic. Something to keep in mind when posting. Overall, great design and strong story, looking forward to seeing more from you!

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