Intro Story / Clementine Grudgett
Critiques & Comments
# 6
Posted:
Apr 20 2016, 03:37 PM
This comic needed either heavier blacks and more shading, or color, as it all looks a little too white for my taste. Your art is very readable, though, and your camera is appropriately dynamic. I could've used a little more dialogue from Clementine as to her relationship with the serpent, I take it she's some sort of monster hunter? I look forward to learning more about what led to her waking up in the Void City outskirts, and her interesting weapon.
# 5
Posted:
Apr 20 2016, 12:16 PM
Lmao, the original pages were twice as big (around 4k?), these are the sized down ones
I'll have to make the res lower next time.
I am much excite to fight, but I worry about deadlines. I can only hope that I'll find the motivation to get comics done quickly enough.
I'll have to make the res lower next time.
I am much excite to fight, but I worry about deadlines. I can only hope that I'll find the motivation to get comics done quickly enough.
# 4
Posted:
Apr 20 2016, 01:32 AM
I have a mighty need to fight her
# 3
Posted:
Apr 20 2016, 12:57 AM
she is there ! FINALYYYYYYY !!!
the pages are a bit big buuuuut doesn't really bother me. just adjust the size of your future comics !
the pages are a bit big buuuuut doesn't really bother me. just adjust the size of your future comics !
# 2
Posted:
Apr 19 2016, 05:44 PM
Hooray you got in!
Pages are too big for my liking, but nevertheless I cannot wait to see you in action.
Pages are too big for my liking, but nevertheless I cannot wait to see you in action.
# 1
Posted:
Apr 19 2016, 05:31 PM
That was freaking awesome! I love your drawing style, and your story is good too! Your character looks great and she enters void with a bang! I look forward to battling you soon!
Your comic is a little large though, I did the same thing with my first intro comic. Something to keep in mind when posting. Overall, great design and strong story, looking forward to seeing more from you!
Your comic is a little large though, I did the same thing with my first intro comic. Something to keep in mind when posting. Overall, great design and strong story, looking forward to seeing more from you!
Beyond Battle
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Apr 26th, 2016
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I like the idea of the character, she seems like she is a great fit for the City, and her character quirks are bound to manifest if some fun ways in future battles.