Well its about closing time, I\'d like to thank everyone for the comments they left.
Nex: What deviant account ? ? ? ? I dont know where you\'ve SEEN this before :cough: thanks
Church: HEY ITS YOU! again . .. thanks im glad you enjoy the 1932841243098 new characters I seem to be introducing every episode and Black\'s gun kung fu. I wrote this episode as an experiment as to what makes AB tick.
Pi: ... but AB \"never\" met Coral . . oh wait , she WILL be sad. But she got zaffe now
Live or Die: Die.
Molotai: I can\'t wait either, theres a lot of things I intend to do with his story.
And thanks to everyone else who took the time to read this I\'ll get back in the game once I\'m done with Arma.
Agent Miranda / Agent Black
Critiques & Comments
# 7
Posted:
Nov 19 2005, 01:13 PM
# 6
Posted:
Nov 15 2005, 10:52 PM
Gvat, cut the shit and quit spamming everyones page with \" I R COMIN 2 GIT U\". Get a character accepted first.
Back on topic:
Nice stuff as always monday, Dig the use of blacks and the plot. This just made me anxious to see the next thing you\'ll come up with. Good on ya.
Back on topic:
Nice stuff as always monday, Dig the use of blacks and the plot. This just made me anxious to see the next thing you\'ll come up with. Good on ya.
# 5
Posted:
Nov 12 2005, 06:55 PM
damn cool, man, damn cool.
I very much like the more structured panels; they make the story much easier to read. Also, props for having such engaging stories; they really blow my socks off.
Looks like Coral\'s going to be sad..
I very much like the more structured panels; they make the story much easier to read. Also, props for having such engaging stories; they really blow my socks off.
Looks like Coral\'s going to be sad..
# 4
Posted:
Nov 12 2005, 01:56 PM
Although your story telling abilities are top notch and your character is fully rounded and enjoyable. I believe its your choreographing that gives Black his grace and deadly efficiency. Agent Black - Finish and Forget, The Wrong man at the Right time.
# 3
Posted:
Nov 11 2005, 06:42 PM
to be truthful the idea of an amnesiac assassin came up when I tried to make a short story, then I tried making a videogame. In fact I should be working on it but instead I ended up here deeper than I expected. Odd huh ? Now im in Arma. and now I think I\'ll be here longer than I expected. Black was gonna be an independent story but I\'d like to have him run into some people before he reaches the ending.
# 2
Posted:
Nov 11 2005, 06:28 PM
I am just continually blasted backward into my unused drum set by your storytelling ability and concepts. I know Monday existed before Void, but did you make up Agent Black entirely for Void?
# 1
Posted:
Nov 11 2005, 06:02 PM
Really good shit here Monday. Love the whole plotline. never expecting the unexpected. love all the scenes. i saw it on dev. and wondered wen it would show up here.
keep it up.
keep it up.
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