24 Hour Comic / Charlie

24 Hour Comic — Charlie

by Charlie

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Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 10   Posted: Oct 10 2015, 12:15 PM
Thanks guys! And yeah Pyras you aren't the only one who feels that way and I know I tend to retread a lot when I just do things for fun. I have many other ideas right now that maybe will eventually see the light of day. I hope this doesn't sound dismissive at all but right now I just am doing what makes me happy and what I like drawing. Whatever  people think of me for it, whatever they may be saying behind my back cause I know it happens...none of that bothers me. I have enough ideas in my head that aren't my usual that when i get to be in the headspace to do those I will. Still thanks for the input all the same! I really hope it doesn't sound like I am just trying to disregard your comment at all.

As for this being a pilot episode, I am thinking of pitching it but I may self publish a redo on this. The response across my social media sites has been quite humbling and people really want to see more, so I think I am gonna give the people what they want. At any rate doing this comic has landed me my first professional comic gig that I am dying to tell you all about but you will have to wait and see for that (but I can assure you it's massive news for me and I am beyond pumped for it).

Anyway thanks again and I wanna stress again that I am not trying to pass off your comment. All crit is good to hear after all.

Jacob Halton
2 comments
# 9   Posted: Oct 9 2015, 09:06 PM
Oh man, 15 hours?? That's insane. This is really good even if you had spent much longer on it.

The Bent One
Artist
564 comments
# 8   Posted: Oct 8 2015, 06:34 PM
Damn, you're a BEAST Charlie!

PyrasTerran
Artist
1512 comments
# 7   Posted: Oct 8 2015, 01:49 PM
Charlie this is a fantastic comic especially considering the time you put into it, the things I would do to be able to draw with as much polish as you do in such short time

what i'ma talk about more is really more of a personal opinion so take it as you will

The characters themselves are cool, but the archetype and some design elements feels too familiar for me, the same non-human-ish butt-kicking girl with stylish nip covers like Pyro and Ailie, and in Ailie's case in particular even matches having a partner who is a larger male with a clearly nonhuman face. It really only goes that far, but for me, after SRT recently, it felt derivative, and I would love to see other types of characters as protagonists in future story ideas you come up with.

Other than that, this is terrific stuff, it really feels like the pilot episode of a long and satisfying series. Keep up the great work!

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 6   Posted: Oct 7 2015, 05:47 PM
Thanks dude :)! I am gonna revise the script and do kind of a deluxe version of this comic.

jba1987
Artist
42 comments
# 5   Posted: Oct 6 2015, 07:03 AM
I've said it before, and I'll say it again: You are my hero. This is gorgeous! Everything about it is great-- and in 15 hours? Unnnf.
Bravo!

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 4   Posted: Oct 5 2015, 12:06 PM
Thanks guys!! Yeah there were definitely a few pages where I was running out of steam and a few panels that I didn't really want to draw since they would take too long so I kind of just said "okay let's just make this one panel really suck so I can move on". The good thing is so many people like the characters that I am seriously contemplating doing an almost complete redo of this comic with better art!

Also Sab I wanted to extend the fight scene by a couple pages but fatigue was starting to set in and setting up complex action sequences flew out the window. By the time I got to the head exploding shot I was like "I better keep this simple" haha! If I do make a comic that retreads this storyline I will definitely give more love to That whole sequence.

EyeAmPhibian
Artist
97 comments
# 3   Posted: Oct 5 2015, 06:05 AM
So friggin' good for 15 hours and 20 minutes. I'm astounded!
Was really nice watching you do some of it too.
The timing and everything was perfect, it flowed really well. There were certain panels that took a second to register, but that was just due to the inherently scrappier nature of a 24 hour comic I guess!
Looking forward to what you pull off with Monster Mash if this is anything to go by.

Sabulive
Artist
133 comments
# 2   Posted: Oct 5 2015, 03:23 AM
OH MAN
I loved this a lot. Shina and Roboface are wonderful, wacky characters and I hope you do more stuff with them! I WANT MORE ADVENTURES! MORE DEBT! MORE PAWNING OFF HOT ROBO CATGIRLS!

My only issue: I wish the page were Shina shot Dread's head off was a bit more action packed. But otherwise this was an excellent 24hr comic!

Charlie
Artist
731 comments
# 1   Posted: Oct 3 2015, 03:09 PM
Okay I did my 24 hour comic in 15 hours and 20 minutes I'm dead.

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