It's good to have another straight up crazy character in VOID. This was interesting, if a bit simple. I feel like it could have been drawn out a bit more to include the two bad guys more. Just make sure you pay attention to details; you switched the arm on the bad guy to the wrong side in several panels. Also, I'm not sure how well your specific style for word balloons works, it sometimes makes them hard to read and they start to bland into the background.
Overall, it's a good short comic and it's awesome that it's colored! Keep up the work!
Arm Yourself / Kill Joy
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# 6
Posted:
Oct 17 2015, 06:07 AM
# 5
Posted:
Sep 17 2015, 07:44 PM
oooooooooooo can't wait!
# 4
Posted:
Sep 17 2015, 07:38 PM
Rarely have I been more excited by a pun.
# 3
Posted:
Sep 17 2015, 04:26 PM
YES.
# 2
Posted:
Sep 17 2015, 02:51 PM
how exciting!
edit: okay every time EVERY TIME i see this in the sidebar, "arm yourself/killjoy" I read it as "kill yourself" and im like "what" so thats my story
edit: okay every time EVERY TIME i see this in the sidebar, "arm yourself/killjoy" I read it as "kill yourself" and im like "what" so thats my story
# 1
Posted:
Sep 17 2015, 01:40 PM
-EYES SPARKLING- !!!!!!!!
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Beyond Battle
Drawing Time:
3 weeks + 1
Ended:
Oct 22nd, 2015
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sorry bout that and thanks mate haha