Performance Arts #01 / Sweet Itch and Margot Seraphina

Performance Arts #01 — Sweet Itch and Margot Seraphina

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Kozispoon
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1211 comments
# 11   Posted: Sep 4 2015, 08:40 PM
This is a healthy relationship :'D

I know you guys have been wanting to do these short little serials of these two and their dysfunctional relationship, so I'm excited to see the first 'issue' on void! We see so many nice or sappy relationships on void, or even bitter rivalries, so it's interesting to see such an off the wall couple like these two. It helps that Margot is suuuuch a hispter.  The things she is dragging poor Itch to are just mind boggling, if not hilarious. I'm a sucker for silly gifs, so it was cool to see Cheech doing his thang on the television (geez, it was on TV even. Not even an actual performance, haha!)

ROFLQU- I wish the colors on this were more punched up. I think the desaturation works for the grim lameness of the school classroom, but their way to the show I feel could've done with some highlights. Additionally, I'm not sure if you had the ability too, but maybe desaturating the gif itself or making the gif black and white would've worked for the scene. I dunno. I'm all for gifs, but I feel it stood out too much for the pages.

ASTRO SEAN- Right off the bat, my first impressions to page one, and really most of the comic are the sparse backgrounds. It really isn't until you read the dialogue between Itch and Margot that you realize they're tromping through a school. Page 1 leaves me wondering if they're still in their apartment, or already in the class? I do like that we see some of the personality of the environment on page 2 since I think that really drives home the gag. I'm not gonna lie I laughed when I saw the 'performance' was being shown on a TV with a phat power strip hanging off it on page 3. If this is what we get to expect when Margot picks date night, then I can't wait for what's in store for them next.

Hobbittastic
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164 comments
# 10   Posted: Sep 2 2015, 12:51 PM
Wow they're both terrible

Sean
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382 comments
# 9   Posted: Sep 2 2015, 10:47 AM
This was a real fun, quick little project. I hope to definitely work on more in the future

PyrasTerran
Artist
1512 comments
# 8   Posted: Sep 1 2015, 01:16 PM
lol so weird

Animeshen
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1490 comments
# 7   Posted: Sep 1 2015, 11:29 AM
what the hell do these two see in each other XD this was a hilarious little slice of their relationship, im glad i didnt get dragged to that performance piece lol. your colours look great, rofl, and i think my favorite part is when the performer comes out with the photo and weeps all over the TV. this was very stupid and i liked it XD

Heathen
Artist
462 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 30 2015, 07:19 PM
I don't think I'm hip enough for this scene.

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 30 2015, 05:50 PM
Hey, this is all ready to go and to upload early.
If you're curious about who did what, I did the story & the colors (basically all digital anythings here). Sean did the pencils/inks. This was a lot of fun, I enjoyed doing it.

Wubble
Artist
91 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 25 2015, 12:24 AM
OH SHIT YES

Kozispoon
Artist
1211 comments
# 3   Posted: Aug 24 2015, 08:32 PM
HYPE HYPE HYPE!
I am so amped to see you guys firing this up. G'luck! :DD

Sean
Artist
382 comments
# 2   Posted: Aug 24 2015, 07:45 PM
Does Howdy Doody got wooden balls, man?

E.W. Schneider
Artist
1070 comments
# 1   Posted: Aug 24 2015, 07:40 PM
Earache my eye!

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